Very nicely written.

You mix up the names of the ships in some places, saying that Eddy's ship is the Galliard instead of the Guardian, Kevin owns the Drachen, etc.

There are some spelling mistakes scattered through the story.

Finally, you never really explain where Maiyumi Kamijo comes in.

Aside from that, this story is very inventive, and I look forward to reading more. (That is, if you haven't finished it. =/)

Nicely done.
I thought they were going 2 get their ass
handed to them at 1st

tight battle scene.
enjoyed this chapeter
read da rest tommorow

Looks like Rolf ready
2 get in da game
Go rolf !

IM just enjoying this more and more.
Eddy and Kev actually called a trus :o
OMG. But it looks like its going 2 be good

This chapter was ight.
A few more details would of did better
But never da less i still want 2 know wats going
2 happen next.

Enjoying it so far.
Looks like its going 2 be a good read so far
But u didnt describe how ami look
but its all good
Good story so far though

MORE CHAPTERS! PLEASE! This is so good

First off, where in the name of Frailea did you get Ed's Wolfftastic last name wich seems to also be the last name of four of my original characters? Email me at with the answer

so cool {excue the pun }plze up date soon I want to know happen after words

Wow, cool. I think the beginning was a little abrupt, though, you didn't explain anything about the hive until the combat had begun. Also, When you mentioned Hiigara, was that a Homeworld reference? If so, cool. Imagine if the Eds and the gang were cornered and being beaten and Karan S'jet and the Home Fleet shows up and kicks rear. That would be cool. I loved how Ami referenced Kevin as "the sadist in the red hat". I look forward to more chappies of this story.

"This is a good story overall, but the author never wrote an ending.The fanfic really takes the elements of the Ed,Edd n'Eddy universe and projects it with a seemingly flawless storyline via a good sci-fi film script.I say the author should write a good ending and send it to either Danny Anoncci,EEnE's creator or A.K.A animation,the show's production company, and ask them to use it as the story line for an Ed,Edd n'Eddy Feature Film.I belive it would be a hit at the box office."
-Tyler Poole ,age 12

MORE CHAPTERS NOW!

Once again, another great chapter! I bow to you! I'm gonna add this to my C2 story collection! If you'd like to join, please email me and I'll add you to my staff, k? ;)

Please continue this asap. I'd love to see what happens next!

I'm glad to get back to reading this. I'm sorry I'm so freakin' slow. ^^;

I loved how you did Rolf in this chapter. It really gives the readers a different look at the character in a fanfiction light, which I believe you did a great job doing so! I'll continue to the next chapter right now! ;)