this is the very first Fanfic i ever read and i cried for hours!! Shego really does rock! Honestly i thought that the illustrations were from the show til i realized that this fanfic wasn't an episode! every time i re read this i still cry.I often find my self comparing other writings to yours and wishing i could write like that.I also told all the teachers at my school to read this, you started me writing about shego. I now have about 18 Stories half finished so I hope to have them all published on this site and maybe one of the ones i am currently writing will have it's own site,too. Thank you for writing this story. I truly think the first Fan fiction someone reads leaves and impression, doesn't it?

I won't lie, I teared up just a little, in the corner of my eye when I reached the end of this. I applaud your work.

Good work! I really enjoyed this novel, and the illustrations too. The progress of Kim's breakdown was so sad and it's great that she finally found out who the real man in her life should be.

nice story!

i really love this story. every part of this story is so convincing and i almost cried in so many places. thank you for writing this for all to read.

Great work. And I've loved the final. And Kim's feelings seems so real and touching. Excellent writing, man.

I love this story. One of the best i have ever read. Would love to read more Kim fan fics from you!

Wow...I am speechless! And I actually cried! This fic was the awesomeness! I haven't read a fic this beautiful in the longest. No joke, it is the best! Def. a favorite!

Amaging. Simply amazing.

Gorgeous. I can say no more. *sobs into nearest pillow of happiness*

I didn't leave a review the first time I read this story cause I wasn't a member. I do have to thank you though this was the first fanfiction that I had ever read and it actually got me into it and renewed my interest in Kim Possible. Still a great story that I come back too time to time I really liked how this one played out. Especially the whole break down thing nothing like a good meltdown to make a great story. Great job.

Man, you did a great, great work.

OMG AMAZING it took me forever to finally finish this ( work and stuff) but im finally done reading and i must say you rock this is an amazing story that should be turned into a book so i can take it every where and read it over and over again

I read this story over two years ago. After stumbling over it again and being overwhelmed by the endless accolades it has bathed in Caligula-like, I am retroactively reviewing it.

This is quite possibly one of the most -- if not THE most -- overrated stories on

The prose is passable, I'll give you that -- so is the structure, characterization (for the most part, at least), and et cetera -- but the plot... Listen: If you're going to write a retelling of Othello -- even nearly going so far as outright STATING that it's a retelling of Othello, at the very beginning -- then you should try to bring something new to the table, rather than what essentially amounts to a straight adaption set within another universe. Anyone who is familiar with Othello -- heck, anyone who isn't, since your allusion at the beginning perfectly sums up what the story is going to be about -- will be able to predict nearly every plot point in this story, which in fact I did, all the way to the very end. A happy, redemptive spin like the one you applied just doesn't cut it as something even approaching fresh and new, either, I'm afraid, since it was apparent from miles away.

However, this alone might not have been quite as glaring, had you not performed a truly fatal transgression. I mean, Jesus Christ -- Shego. I don't know what I was expecting from a story titled "Shego Rocks!" -- which itself is a handle that is eyebrow-raising -- but it certainly wasn't... this. You took her character, laid her bare on a chopping block, carved her to pieces, and then pieced her back together like a well-intentioned but grotesque Mr. Potato Head. Characters who are virtually perfect -- who are super model-caliber beautiful, professional martial artists, expert piano players, classy fashionistas, and scientific geniuses who in minutes can cobble together a ** computer with spare junk found lying around a high school classroom -- are unrealistic (even in Kim Possible), unlikeable, and just plain uninteresting; everything else in the story suffers by proxy, having this ugliness reflected onto them by such an integral character. A character -- villain or hero -- needs SOME flaws in order to be a person that the audience can take into their hearts, and a tragic backstory where, alas, my boyfriend left me and set me on a downward spiral into villainy, does not itself constitute a flaw and is in fact trite and unimpressive per se. Without these flaws, they are a just another forgettable Mary Sue, even if they have skinned a regular cast member and are wearing their hide like some sort of literary Leatherface.

I won't even address the underwhelming ending.

Why this thing is placed on so high a pedestal, I cannot really guess. I've seen worse -- far worse -- but there is so much better out there.

Man that story rocked it had everything a reader could want suspense drama mystery keep it going