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tiamat333
2009-08-19 . chapter 9
hey

awesome get some more mini chapters out there
tiamat333
2009-08-19 . chapter 6
um weird
tiamat333
2009-08-19 . chapter 4
oh, this is cute! I think what could happen is that all the characters start mingling.
tiamat333
2009-08-19 . chapter 2
oi i think it is funi, ending with sango screamed. I think you could make it a little better though, add more detail...
Griddlebone
2007-08-19 . chapter 9
Lovely story. The tone and length of it are great, it all just seems to work. I only wish there was more of it to enjoy. Keep up the great work.
justice
2006-12-07 . chapter 9
Ilove this story . The only sad thing is that you update too sporadically.
Araine
2006-12-06 . chapter 9
Oh goodness, holiness, and all things munderful. You are amazing as always! I am in love with your work and your characterization of Miroku and Sango... I think if Miroku and Sango weren't my favorite characters already, you would have made them into my favorite characters. Because you are just. that. amazing.

Oh, oh, and they're going out on a date! Well, sorta, but... you get the point. It is the cuteness, fo sho. (I am on a bit of a sugar high... meh)

Anyways, beautiful, wonderful. Amazing.

Oh, and, um (I know I'm rambling), have you ever heard of Official Fanfiction Universities? Because I started one, and was wondering if you would bother reading it and telling me what you think...? It's for the InuYasha-verse, so... -shrug-

Anyways, really, really, really, really, really like! Daisuki!
Neko-Yuff16
2005-08-28 . chapter 8
heh...poor inu...lol! update soon!
medlii
2005-08-28 . chapter 8
Good chapter! You led me in the wrong direction with Inuyasha's nervousness but it was funnier that way. You made it fun and cute in just a few lines. Keep writing!
Akeryou-sama
2005-08-16 . chapter 7
nice!! update soon!
XxLilyNGxX
2005-08-11 . chapter 7
i think i first read this fic like a year ago...u better finish it or else!1
medlii
2005-08-10 . chapter 7
Good update! It was nice to see it from Kohaku's point of view, and Miroku's antics are cute! Sango better fall for him soon! I love this story, update soon!
lil_sanoku105
2005-08-07 . chapter 6
wow, long time since you updated!
I wish that you'd make your chapters a little longer, but besides that its great. I especially liked the part where Miroku was trying to look over her shoulder. He can never take a hint, can he?

~Update soon, please!~
Artemis Riyo
2005-08-06 . chapter 6
Yay! Your not dead!
medlii
2005-08-06 . chapter 6
Interesting... I'd like to see where this chapter is going and what "A Feudal Fairytale" has to do with it, especially since Inuyasha doesn't read. You're doing a great job of keeping everyone in character so far!
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