Is there going to be a second chapter? I loved it!! Keep writing please, love your hurt/comfort stories!

I'm impressed that you can write a scene so angsty but... the end isn't really happy. Satisfying?

It works, anyway.

Beautiful

Nicely written.

wow, that was really great! Short but sweet and sad!

Another amazing story. Keep going, you definitely have talent!

Hey, this was great! Loved the attention to detail. Only an hour, huh? Great nonetheless.

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This is good~SammyBlack

Woman, you get better and better. I demand more fics from you. :) I'm afraid you'll have to quit your job and just entertain us. :D

It looks to me as if 'quick-fic' is your strength, Lila, not your weakness! It may have been longer if you worked more than an hour, but I doubt it would have been *better*.

I don't know if I reviewed it on list already (id: lt_cate_pike).
But it's worth reviewing twice.
I don't think this could have been better if you had more time. Loved it =)