Wow, this was great; and I imagine that this may be how they were all feeling during the episode.

AHH! That was so PERFECT. An extremely necessary episode addition. I just saw The Games today for the first time, which meant I could finally read this fic!

I loved it, as I love all your stuff...your characterization was right on target. Everything was perfect...and that last line! I mean, WOW...it really was a perfect metaphor! Brilliant...please write more, I can barely wait for your next fic...

LOL! That last line there was really funny! Wonderfully done- everyone was in perfect character as usual. I also wanted some M/R closure at the end of that episode. I mean, when she whipped at Tribune's wrist and then laughed and then the credits came I was like, "That's it? No M/R?" I wanted a kiss... :-(

Anyway, great job on this fic- on ALL your fics- you're a great writer, Susan! I hope I can read more of your works soon!

Audrey

Fantastic! Really enjoyed this story. You write so well and have the character's spot on. Thanks for an enjoyable read :)

REALLY nicely done. A scene such as this should have been tacked onto the end of the episode. God only knows it needed it. ::grin grin:: Nice job, good characterization. Everyone was PERFECTLY in character.

Great Storytelling!:) Although my heart went out to Marg, she may have had her heart in gthe right place but things sure don't work that way! I'd have loved it to more mushy but ya can't have everythin ...;)

keep up the terrific work!

Excellent ending, but it left me wanting more. Once again you captured the characters. Keep it up I'll be looking for more.

good. I liked it

i so loved that. keep up the good work

Again, another strong story arc. I would have dearly paid to have this "bathroom" scene tacked on to the episode. You nailed the "tension" between the characters perfectly. Thank you for giving us "better" stuff between reruns and new episodes.

I liked the shows end, but I liked yours better.

Sorry, don't have much more to say than that. Keep writing.

Good story and well written.

I really enjoyed it! Your perspective was one I hadn't considered when I was

watching the episode - I hope you post some more!

A much more appropriate ending then the show had. Great job. Can't wait to read more of your stories

I guess it would make a little more sense if I had seen the episode but from what I understood I liked