Wonderful.

I love the new position you've put on Mantaro's perspective, and how he may be feeling.

Wow! _ You've certainly improved your writing skills! It's odd actaully, you wrote a fic about Mantaro's win and I wrote a fic about Kevin's loss...odd that...anyway, love how you potrayed Mantaro, damn, you do it so well!

I thought that this was very well written and fairly amusing.

i really enjoyed the way that you made the comment about it seeming strange of the turn out of the chojin crown and the idea of the other characters and having side jobs, and Kevin and his prank calls.

I guess what i really want to say is, well done.

Excellent job on this. I like this more angsty side of Mantaro that you've portrayed. Your writing is getting better and better! Keep it up! X3