i really loved this story. great characters though it doesn't going into much detail about laura and josh's past relationship. i love the casual, real-life language and slang.

Aw Man...this this...oh forget this. Lessee just say it'd get three thumbs up...cept I only have two. ;)

Loved it very much!... Just wondering... when are you going to finish the Poker trilogy?

*screams and runs in circles* Oh my goodness! Oh my! I'm happy for life. Rachel and Josh... no Laura. No Laura! WHOO! Go off with some other guy, you annoy the hell outta me little woman. *coughs* This was simply adorable, I loved it so much. Thank you. The little bit at the end? The dance? The kiss? Everything? Perfect. Oh I love you! *huggles you tightly* WRITE MORE! Write anything Max Steel more! That was so wonderful. Evil Laura. Wonderful Rachel! Mmm... yay! Thank you kindly. MORE! la la la! *bows and runs away*

Very nice, girl! Yeah, seems like all of my stories that just "hit-and-run" are the ones everyone likes the best. I don't know. But that was great! Look, I gotta go work on a story something I've been meaning to get up. Catch ya later! Luv ya all!

-Maxy Steel