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| q.thews 2007-04-08 ch 1,  | abuseWell... i don't really sail this ship but it was a nice reading. It even make some sense that they could (finally) communicate between them by owl as writing give them the time to think and not being too impulsive. Ciao! |
| SiriusGirl 2006-12-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love this story and have read it more than once. PLEASE write a sequal! I will love you forever! (In a platonic way of course!) |
| txcowgirljp 2006-12-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseHOLY COW! That was incredible! One of my all time favorite fanfics - and trust me, i have read plenty! What else have you written? You totally had the characters spot on by the way! And i know that it says to "comment on an aspect of the story that can be improved" but my only comment is to write more!! |
| justakid-24 2006-08-04 ch 1, | abuseaww...I don't usually like stories written out with letters, but this one works! I like how their closings change from just their names to eventually Love throughout the course of the summer! I think you should write a sequel with them going to hogwarts that year and getting together! I need closure! lol...good story! |
| kyung-sook 2006-05-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseaw, this was really sweet. I enjoyed it a lot. Only one comment - though Hermione's font is very cool, it is a tad hard to read at some points. Perhaps you could change it? |
| ronaldbiliusweasley 2005-12-30 ch 1, | abuseIts funny I was thinking of having a letter relationship between them like yours.I loved your fanfic. |
| Digital Damita 2005-11-23 ch 1, | abuseAw I love it so so so much :) It was wonderful |
| <3rupert 2005-11-12 ch 1, anon. | abusehaha very nice! funny how the letters get gradually longer and how all of a sudden ron says love, Ron. i liked it alot very cute! good job. |
| FLyingFeather 2005-09-11 ch 1, anon. | abusethat was, as Ron would say, Bloody Brilliant! |
| Xedra 2005-08-23 ch 1, | abuseWow! I majorly enjoyed reading this! You captured Ron and Hermione's "voices" perfectly, too. The way you eased their conversations into thr romantic territory was very well done. This gave me lots of warm fuzzies and it's going on my Favorites list. :) |
| sic-itur-ad-astra 2005-06-07 ch 1, | abuseI like how they didn't turn into sappy love letters and yet you still could tell something was building between them. I especially liked the transfer to "love" and Hermione's prompting of getting him to admit his feelings very cute. And of course - it wouldn't be a Ron/Hermione fic without their constant bickering - love it :D |
| Jyl 2005-05-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseI loved your story! You captured both characters so well and PLEASE e-mail me if you are thinking about writing a sequel because I would love to read it! |
| ScarletAngel68 2005-05-23 ch 1, | abuseThis was really sweet. ^.^ The person who reccomended this fic to me noticed that Ron changed the way he signed his letters throughout the story! From just "Ron," to "Yours, Ron," to...well, he was angry, so "Ron" again, and then "Love, Ron," which...squee. There are lots of letter fanfictions out there, but this is one of the nicest ones I've read. :) |
| koolkayhottie 2004-10-10 ch 1, | abusenice job |
| Lorenza 2004-09-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is really very, very good! (I'm sure someone has already pointed out to you that the currency in Britain is pounds, not dollars and the season is called autumn, not fall...I really enjoyed your story, but those are quite annoying errors ;)) |