An interesting fic about the aftermath of Daniel losing another person to the Goa'uld. Jack and Daniel must have talked afterwards and it again shows their deepening friendship. On TV there wasn't a full exploration of the fact that Daniel has to go through this again and confront the fact that he will no doubt see Sarah again.

I liked this, especially the end where Daniel can't close his eyes. Good story.

fishing with Jack O'Neill...why does it sound so scary?

it was a good story. You have written them well. I know how hard it is to write someone else's character. Keep up the good work.

Really good. Maybe you should have done it a little longer, though. Write more! :o)

Cool, i liked it. Yeas daniel is allowed to mature (and get angry!)

ohhhh. I like it!