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Lone Wolf Tifa
2008-10-16 . chapter 35
Holy crap, that was the best ending ever! I think I get now, after Quistis defeated Rinoa, she changed the world everyone wanted it to be, so everyone would be happy in the end. Wow, I didn't even think Rinoa would be the final enemy...
Aixyutin
2007-07-14 . chapter 35
Hello.

I've been haunting you from Diamond Dust, to Shards of Eternity.

Yes... it's a fulfilling story. And while I would have like it to turn out differently it's... fitting. Very fitting.

Thank you. You're story provided a lot of introspective to the world... and time... and space...

and just... things.
Tifa Strifeheart
2007-05-06 . chapter 35
Often, in the past, I probably reviewed as a guest, to lazy to login, but this time i want you to know whose reviewing.

I just have to say i LOVED you Tortured Souls stories. They are just great. At times I was kept on the edge o fmy seat waiting for the next chapter. I know this is coming a bit late but 'to each his /her own. You Stories make me experience a lot of things, almost moved me to tears in some places... ALMOST. I just really have to apriciate something like that.

Reading such stories of characters that I've fallen in love with gives me such joy. I know I'd be able to die happy if I was able to write like you... Alright enough with the sappyness (is that a word?)

Great, just loved it. Stop writing for a second and I'll hunt you down and kill you wherever you are. Don't deprive us of talent such as yours. ^_^ Sha, later!
Ennithree
2005-02-04 . chapter 35
Beautiful. I feared it was becoming lost when I read the first chapters, but the ending formed a poignant keystone to your "Tortured Souls" trilogy.

Please don't stop writing.
Ma-chan1
2004-11-09 . chapter 1
Yay! Everyhting turns out right! Where was Diablos though? Poor Hyne though.
I promised that I would review so I have! Making my way through the other stories now. Bye. Keep up the good work!
Ma-chan
eviljedijackson
2004-07-10 . chapter 35
god ** damn you all to hell :(
you take a wonderful story, and plunge it into tragedy, happiness, love, hate, and a sorrowful ending, that I can't help but still lvoe it anyways.

I honestly don't like the directions you took the plot, too tragic for my tastes, but holy ** **, you write so well, I can't help but love it. please, for the love of Hyne, god satan, and Zeus, keep writing these wonderfully tragic tales of love and sorrow.
please, email me at eviljedijackson@hotmail.com wit some kind of reply.
Kentai
2004-06-30 . chapter 35
Your stories always make me speechless. It's too bad they have to end. I hope someday to come across stories as well written as yours. It's amazing the impact your ideas have. Very moving. Good luck to you with whatever it is you plan on doing now.
NineCalaveras
2004-06-30 . chapter 35
Ah...and there's the releif I was asking for. Bravo. An amazing story and an amazing tale. I love how you mixed Quistis and Rinoa's stories together, it just worked so well.

I can't help but think you'd do a very good job writing a FFX-2 story with Paine as the main character. She's such a mystery anyways, and her chemistry with Yuna and Rikku is riveting. I'm sure you could so pull it off, but of course, I can't tell you what to write...

...No, but I DARE you. Just write a story with Paine as the main character, I'd love to see what you would come up with.

Well...I really do look forward to any new stories from you, Pierson, you're a fantastic writer with one hell of a twisted mind...

...And I like that.

Til next time then.
NineCalaveras
2004-06-30 . chapter 31
Hyne dammit, can't there ever be some kind of relief? Yeah sure, Quistis may save the world, but at what freaking cost? And if Akime's dead then I'm going to throw one hell of a fit. Both Rikku and Quistis deserve some rest, and it would have been fantastic to have Akime to atleast have a short conversation with Rikku after what she went through to get where she is now. My, Pierson, you sure do know how to make a person depressed and cynical.

"She saved the world, only to find the one person she cared about most was dead and half the world blown to smithereens. The end."

Bloody hell.
NineCalaveras
2004-06-28 . chapter 4
Lol. Rikku versus Hellsing? Heh heh, "Wooden stakes hurt."
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And she blew up an airport terminal? Wouldn't she feel some kind of guilt? I mean, don't get me wrong, but don't people DIE when stuff blows up? Especially when the stuff that is blowing up just so happens to be a place where alot of people go?
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Gonna read the next chapter. Enjoying this so far, but I wonder...when exactly did you write this story? More importantly, when did you finish it?
NineCalaveras
2004-06-28 . chapter 3
So Rikku has outlived her freinds and is now living in present-day Earth. Intriguing.

Chapter two was a bit confusing, mainly because no one was really 'identified'. But this chapter cleared some things up, obviously. Who is this girl that Rikku seems to be 'connected' with? And if she really can sense her, then what does that make the girl?
x Machi-Chan x
2004-06-28 . chapter 35
I read all your other fics...then I never got to read this one. I also never reviewed you (I think) so, I'm giving you one now. It's a shame really, you not doing anymore fics. But anyway, such a lovly way to finnish a trilegy. One thing I must say though, Rikku never onced mentioned that she missed Auron (from Darness falls) but because of how it ended, she wouldn't, would she? ^_^ You are forever on my favs!!
Xan
2004-06-19 . chapter 35
I finally finished this thing, it's 1am, my brain is frazzled ... all I can say is "Whoa". I love how she rewrites everything that happened so they can finally be happy - it's one of the best endings I've ever seen. And not because it's actually an ending, not one of those half-open pieces of crap that so many people seem to love writing.

Also, Rinoa as the crazy sorceress person was awesome. Ok, so I thought the whole all-for-the-love-of-Squall thing was a bit weak ... but then again, I'm not much of a romance person. Very cool, anyway. She really does come across as a nutcase.
Xan
2004-06-19 . chapter 27
... oh. It makes a helluva lot more sense now. Lol.
Xan
2004-06-19 . chapter 6
I'm way confused.

Just wanted to mention that.

*goes back to reading*
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