 teanau 2008-07-08 . chapter 1I did read the originally ETA and loved it last year ! and now ETA pop again, please write some more depth TM story . |
 AgentRez 2008-07-06 . chapter 14This is one of my favorite stories ever! I'm glad you decided to add an epilogue. Making it on the day of Sophie's wedding was really cute. Obviously, I wouldn't have had Jack end up with Kate, but it makes sense in the context of this story. Great job...glad to see you're still writing. You're one of the best 24 fanfic writers on this site. |
 gill 2007-08-15 . chapter 15 really sweet so enjoyed it but nb you always spell cyprus wrong. |
 .Lost-Blue-Phantom. 2007-06-02 . chapter 15Aw, you were right to tell me to read your other Tochelle stories. I loved this one. On to the next one. |
 heather1021 2007-03-06 . chapter 15that was a beautiful ending. nicely done. |
 heather1021 2007-03-04 . chapter 9that ending brought tears to my eyes. nicely done. |
 heather1021 2007-03-04 . chapter 2oh my god. if s3 ended that way (except for the "tony going to prison" part) i would have died happy. |
 JustPlainJane 2006-12-02 . chapter 15Great story, I really loved it...
yep... your stories are great! |
 Radwa 2006-08-21 . chapter 15now that's the way I tend to see the people at CTU,one family that cares about each other.Michelle was so strong and loving and Sophie was so cute.My heart was pounding when Tony was going to cheat on Michelle.Thank God he didn't,great story |
 lialou22 2006-05-13 . chapter 15Wow! I loved this story, too! I am a big t/m fan and I was not disappointed. I am definitely reading the sequel... is it called Undercover? sorry if i'm wrong. Good job! :) |
 Sparkliing 2006-02-13 . chapter 15okay so i said i would review more of your stories, and i always keep my promises! This one i discovered last week and read in a couple of days. I'm the kind of person who loves fluffy Tony/Michelle post season 2 love stories so this was a little different for me, to read something sad and with a deeper point. I love the way that you really understand how much they missed eatch other while he was in Argentina by this story and how he stayed faithfull to her and arranged so he could meet his daughter. I'm also a sucker for happy endings, if it would have ended with Tony still in Argentina i probably would've sobbed in front of the computer right now!! I love this story, please wright more soon :) |
 Kathinka 2005-11-29 . chapter 15 just as great as you other stories! Loved the Sophie's favorite toy is the one from her father! That's cute! Keep on writing! |
 li'lmissnitpick 2005-11-23 . chapter 14i just discovered something interesting that you might want to know about the legal aspect of things. For michelle to help tony get away or even see him afterward is considered being an accessory after the fact, not aiding and abetting. the cool thing is, though, that (in canada at least) spouses are exempt from prosecution in such a case. the government figues that they'll help each other anyway and that it would be unconstitutional to prevent them from doing so. |
 lemontree 2005-10-19 . chapter 15 just so great story, one of the best i have ever read!:) |
 AgentRez 2005-08-02 . chapter 1I really like this story...it's well thought out and I love the political angle. |