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I AM BEGGING YOU
2007-11-25
ch 32, anon.
abuseit keeps saying that u have over "10" reviews well NO u have over ONE THOUSAND REVIEWS telling you that you rock! please please continue
I AM BEGGING YOU
2007-11-25
ch 32, anon.
abusewell can u at least trry to make this story work out!? i mean seriously your a grreat writer and you have over 10 reviews telling you take in both stories. even though it turns out to be crappy just finish it you have so many chapters yet there is no ending it is seriously heartbreaking that a magnifestic writer cannot even finish a story look at all the other writers out there they have a deadline that they must complete a book up too yet u have all the time in the world to finish a story that was... IS loved by all pleasepleaseplease finish theses both stories i dont care if it takes you 50 years just finish noth stories for us and for you (so we dont have to bother you anymore) thankabunch!
AnimeFreak688
2007-11-09
ch 32,
abuseAwesome story! I wish so much that you would finish this... but hey, you can't force inspiration, right?
Ne, could you give me permission to continue this story? I'm not saying that I'm anywhere near the level of your awesome writing, but I have a really got idea for where the plot can head so... yeah...
peachtarts
2007-08-22
ch 1,
abusePremier, le canadien, eh? [= Je suis le français-américain, bien que je suis plus aisé dans l'anglais que français -- parce que j'habite en l'amérique actuellement, et pas beaucoup d'américains parlent français. ♥

And, thanks for replying, too XD;; Umm, well, instead of just reading the last chapter of this story, I decided to hell with it, and now I'm reading the whole thing. Already, just from this first chapter, my despair for these stories not being continued grows. ): It's a great first chapter, really, and I love how you brought into the whole element of Yevon being lying evil bastards like they were in the game, though I admit I have a bit of a hard time picturing Tidus - independent, smartass, childish Tidus - as one of the Yevonite warriors, though it's super-interesting the different ways you characterize him in your stories. It's like, they're all the same person, but with incredibly different situations, and as such the characterization changes with the different ways one boy has been raised.

*done analyzing* (;

♥; Anyway, on to the rest of the story.
Yoseibella
2007-07-16
ch 32, anon.
abuseI totally understand where your coming from, but this is one damn good story! i couldnt take my eyes off the screen. I'm sad to hear you wont be finishing it.
A Loving Fist
2007-06-14
ch 32,
abuseIt happens to everyone.
Le Pecore Nere
2007-06-12
ch 32,
abuseOkay, I just got done reading all of this, and I must say that you are a very good author. I hope that your inspiration comes back and if you ever need help, feel free to PM or e-mail me. I love the way you made this story unique, yet still kept the characters as their canon selfs. I hope you update soon.
4 The Gr8r Good
2007-05-05
ch 32,
abuseI read this a couple months ago, but might as well put a review on my favorite ffx fic EVER! Too bad it's not finished. Hope ya get your inspiration back soon!

-mel
Blackheart Syaoran
2007-02-16
ch 32,
abuseI hear you, and I'm extremely sorry that you've been pushed to such an extreme. I myself have fics that, for the longest time, I haven't touched, and I may never again, much to the chagrin of dedicated fans. A lot of us will no doubt still harbor hope the stories won't go unfinished, perhaps in the form of a secondary writer whom you allow to complete your works while you approve accordingly. Regardless, I salute your abilities and dedication to the pen, and I hope to see your new works with as much joy as I have your old ones. Until you write again.

Sincerely, Yours In Ink,

Blackheart Syaoran
Razgriz Hero
2007-01-31
ch 32,
abusewtf! this story is over i spent all day reading this good story and now i found out its over. dude if u can plz keep updating this story
mezarumi jahdei seami
2006-12-28
ch 32, anon.
abusehey, i really did love your story "Children of Light". you are a very talented writer. i'm a story writer, too. i don't write fanfiction though, tried it once and failed miserably. i think you should try to continue this story, or at least tell us the ending. i have two book series (in the process of publishing, but already copyrighted) "Creatures" and "Creatures: The Untold Series". the second one is for an older audience. if you want to read my stories, i would love to have you as a reader, you could definitely give me some great input, since you're such a wonderful writer yourself. i want you to know, i have been reading this story since you started it, and i am extremely impressed. you were definitely one of my top inspirations to keep my series going. thankyou very much for writing this story and having so much dedication to your readers. i'm sure i speak for everyone when i say that your dedication to your readers is that of a true writer, and this is a wonderful story, worth publishing, if only it wasn't based off of a game.
sparzelli
2006-10-11
ch 32,
abusemaybe you should have some character in the story get dissapointment too. but dont worry. youll get the inspiration back, someday

i thought beneath the mask was incredible.
original.

maybe a little more brainstorming, but who knows?
youll probably finish these one day.
Yuniie
2006-10-09
ch 32,
abuseomg...thats so sad, i rele like Beneath The Mask and Children Of Light, and i understand how you feel, because its happened to me. i think i almost cried when i read that T_T
Fantasy Starlette
2006-10-07
ch 32,
abuseI'm real sorry that you have writers block, but it really isn't that bad. I know that alot of people wish they had an ending, but some people like to imagine their own endings. I have always liked ALL of your stories, i know your a good writer and i know you will come up with some more great stories. Good Luck!
fool...
2006-10-06
ch 32, anon.
abusei am pretty much depressed now... i loved this story so much like i honestly read it over and over again never knowing how it is going to end... but i guess it never will... and thats what i hate about fanfics people write and say they cannot finish it or dont have any ideas when you wrote 31 chapters and have 488 comments i hate it i say finish a story then write another cause when you start another you completly forget the other but whatever i dont care dont finish your just a fool!
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