YAY! a literati fic! i luv it! update soon!

Good story! Thank you so so much for not putting Rory w/ Dean... they just don't mesh well together... anywayz... great story!

aw...mini jess in superman pajamas. how CUTE is that? anyway, loved this chapter, SO glad shes going with him to new york. i cant wait for the next chapter! (is lorelai going to skin jess alive? im SO excited about lorelai and luke's reactions!)

Hey!

This is a cute story and pretty well written.

Bye, smile :-)

o cmon give us another update, PWEASE!

heyy! i really like this story! ive been looking for stories to read but i havent found any good ones..im glad i finally found one that jess comes back! good job. i cant wait to read more of it

Hey!

This was a pretty good first chapter. I just thought that Jess would have taken seeing Rory with Dean like that a little more seriously, but other than that it was good, so update asap.

Bye, smile :-)

god! I hope this happens well...they actually did but i wish jess would come back!

I love Rory/Jess I love Jess even more! well please update soon!

meg

Yay! This fic shows Rory realistically, unlike the show... where she was completely out of character. I think this is pretty original because no one has even bothered to make a fic where Rory actually stops Dean from what he's doing... and where Jess shows up. Again, I say "yay!" Update soon.

Good. I like the idea. I think you tried to put too much into one chapter though. I really liked the relation you made of when Rory went to Washington and what Jess did. I liked it.

ah, the bliss of reading a rewrite of that god-awful episode (...ok, so the episode kicked massive amounts of ass, EXCEPT for the awful narc action...may i just say "ew"?). i like this version, and i love that jess came back. please have her go get him! i love reading people's different versions of what would happen if she left with him (which, in my mind, is what any sane girl would do.). anyhoo, loved the first chapter, very well written, so do us all a favor and CONTINUE!