Oh, wow. Wow. This is beautiful, absolutely beautiful. Heart-breakingly beautiful. I'm speechless. This hits hard and stays with the reader, and is absolutely gorgeously written. This captures both of them and their dynamic and thier pain so perfectly. As a G/Ser, I have to say this is one of my new favorites. I'm sure this sounds weird, but thank you so much for writing this. Excellent, excellent work!

Aw!

I loved it!

Wonderful story. You had them both completely in character and it seems so show worthy.

I don't want to pressure you into writing a second part to this, but if you did I would defintely love it.

Awesome work!

Hope to see more stories from you.

:-);-)

Hey, I'm with Psyched on this one. Don't hate you either! LOL. Great story. Extremely well done. Just the right mix of hope and angst. Of course, this story just begs a sequel so unless you want me changing my mind 'bout the hatin' thing, you better get to work! Just kidding- not about the sequel though. That would fantastic.

Beautiful.

Sorry to disappoint, but this G/S shipper doesn't hate you at all. I thought this was was a wonderful story. You captured their emotions and angst so well, and made the scenario wholly believable. Great job!

While I certainly don't hate you, you could probably make me LOVE you if you go ahead and write a sequel in which Sara returns and Grissom finally gets to say those words to her... ;-)

Ah, so well written. Very angsty, but so true...