This is an amazing read. Your a word maestro. I love the metaphors and the setting and how you made the paradox and the environment and everything so seamlessly a part of this vignette. Just perfect.

** amazing. I love how you really embraced her **-up character, giving her this... perfectly deranged mind. Loved it.

100% gogo. the line about how axes are pretty much interchangeable with lollipops stuck out the most. oh yeah, and not to mention the hot scenes w/ gogo and o-ren. man. a brilliant, colorful, and insightful piece.

Excellent work, indeed. =D *adores the Go Go/O-Ren pairing* You have a unique writing style and kept Go Go utterly in-character.

I'll have to check out more of your work, methinks.

Whoo, pretty good stuff, Oro. I don't know what you've read in order to be able to write like this, but do me a favor and keep at it. I'll say it: This story is every Kill Bill fan's little dream.You've got an erotic style, kind of like Anne Rice, but not as perverse. Your style of writing makes me think of Go Go's life flashing before her eyes, right as she saw her own crimson pool spreading on the floor as she died.
I really enjoyed your story. And I don't usually say that to anyone. Hopefully, you'll feel proud of your work.
Ellusionist.

Lord have mercy! This fic is fabulous! Well done. You capture Go Go really well.

This is really excellent. Thank you for reminding me about a particular flavor of Go-Go's environment that I enjoy, and that balances so well against her person. You've characterized her wonderfully, and there are a number of lines that stick in the mind long after reading. Playstations and really, really ** up.

Thanks for writing this. It makes me remember why I like certain paradoxes.

must... have more Gogo/O-ren... :)

supercalifragilisticexpialidocious, eh?
Well then, cheers!

This was very nice... In-character and saucy, with that slight touch of insanity that we all love about Gogo. >:P I always thought Gogo and O-ren were a little too close in the movie, mwahaha. ^_~

seamless. devious. sexy. mm-mm.

too perfect for words! it describes Go Go perfectly!! its great! eep writing Go Go fics!!