|Reviews for Mercenaries don't die|
| M3m0rii 4/9/05 . chapter 10
Another quality chapter! *grin*
No problems that I can see, great work with the characters, love the descriptions. Got a question, though: When you were working on the plot, did you cover arcs? Conclusion of events and work backwards? The beginning? A major event and flesh out details at random? Convoluted charts? Outlines?
*bright smile* Still readin'ya.
| HellPhyre 4/9/05 . chapter 9
. How'd she survive the kamikazi attacks?
Jadrek's only fan
| Death Phoenix 4/9/05 . chapter 10
| Lady Ealisaid of the Stars 4/3/05 . chapter 9
Wow, its been a LONG time since I reviewed this story, although I read this chapter a long time ago. ANYWAYS! I loved it! It makes me really happy when you update, so yeah. *wink wink* Im starting to think that "'Ana cow" means something entirely different than wanting a cow, but I could be wrong. I have this strange suspicion that its somewhat important. But thats just me. PLEASE update soon, I will be eternally gratefull!
| M3m0rii 3/16/05 . chapter 9
“Right. Establish a routine. Got it. Reveille, chow, exercise, chow, cleaning, chow, bath, bed. Same as with the Bolts. We can do this.”
Needless to say, you had me laughing hard in many instances of this story. I like the children, even more I liked the mutterings of frazzled Kero. I swear, I don't know how you manage if many of these incidents were perpetrated by those in your care.. I would have been batty or handled it badly.
*chuckle/sigh* Love your work. I'm readin' ya.
| wizard116 3/1/05 . chapter 9
wow the girls have strong gifts. great job with the chapter. can't wait for the next.
| AzureHart 2/28/05 . chapter 9
The MI I got at the toddlers stern, “No! Bad magic! Go t’ room!” had me in stitches.
I look forward to your next update.
| Hiron Otsuki 2/27/05 . chapter 9
Maybe I'm reading a little too far into this, but does "'Ana cow" have anything to do with "Ancar," even though he's pretty dead. Nice new chapter.
| Jerry Unipeg 2/27/05 . chapter 9
I LOVE THIS CHAPTER! Love the last part of the chapter.
| wishingIcouldthinkofsomething 2/26/05 . chapter 8
I've read all the chapters you've posted so far in your Kero/Eldan fic and it's hilarious. I was really glad to see a Valdamar fic that was a bit less sappy than some about one of the best characters. You really managed to get Kero's reaction to being dumped with a bunch of kids under Trainee age just right. The whole story reminds me of one of Kero's lines in Winds of Fury to after Need mindspeaks her, "Why does everything in my life have to come back and haunt me and talk in my head!"
The choices of the neices' gifts was the only part that seemed a little off of the books. I only say this because I was remebering a line from the first Tarma and Kethry book (The Oathbound) where Kethry's horrible brother is talking to her even more horrible "husband" and says something like, "how could she have gotten that strong, mage gift breeds true in only 1 in 10 births in my family."
Keep up dating!
| HellPhyre 2/24/05 . chapter 8
What about Jadrek's stuff? erm... yeah. Otherwise, verry good chapter.
-Jadrek's biggest and only fan!
| Ms Arano 2/24/05 . chapter 8
XD too great...I give you skittles
| Lady Ealisaid of the Stars 2/23/05 . chapter 8
YES! I was so exited when I saw that you updated! This chapter was a really good one, I liked it! Good to know someone liked your least favorite chapter huh? I laughed so hard at the end! The second I read the part about the girls being manipulated by a mage, I yelled, "Plot development!" it was great. Update soon! Please and thank you! Loved it!
| Jerry Unipeg 2/23/05 . chapter 8
I LOVE THIS CHAPTER! Great ending to the chapter!
| wizard116 2/23/05 . chapter 8
ha! that's great! i loved the ending to the chapter! great job with the whole story and i can't wait to see about the mage.