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| crazyDFFgang 2006-08-20 ch 14, | abuseHey... Just found this and I have to say, I like it a lot! It's a really cute story with a sweet end! Congratulations! (Chrissy.W.x, member of the crazyDFFgang) |
| Lynnicaec 2006-06-26 ch 14, | abuseI liked it but I don't think it was fair to Chris when they didn't tell her about Bianca. And you would think after those dreams Chris would be at least a little curious. I didn't like Hope too much. I felt bad that Bianca's family was all killed and then you had her die with some conflicts like the fact that she was Chris' fiance in the unchanged future. But other than that I liked the story. You kept the everyone in character and that show I would think the sisters and Leo would react to the 'new' Chris. Over all; Good job! Lynnicaec "I thought a professional demon chaser like yourself would've figured it out by now. I'm the Slayer. Slay-er. Chosen One. She-who-hangs-out-a-lot-in-cemeteries? You're kidding. Ask around. Look it up: "Slayer, comma, the." -Buffy |
| Acacia Jules 2005-05-04 ch 13, | abuseOne, Hope sucks. There is absolutely no reason for us to like her. Two, you expect us to believe that Chris would have no feelings what-so-ever for Bianca, even though he got all his memories back. On top of which, her rage was totally justified, the Charmed Ones murdered her whole family, she's totally alone in the world, and all she has is revenge. But no, killing her is absolutely justified. No trying to talk, no appologizing for destroying her entire life, taking away everyone she loved. Just murder. Wow, your such an empathic author. You really understand emotions. *rolls eyes* Gods, it's so obvious you just wanted to get her out of the way so you could shove your own self-created character down our throats. |
| PrueTrudeau 2004-12-22 ch 14, | abusereally great story! it's not the usual bla bla... and i liked how u joined teh chris we know with the grown up abyb chris. u dealt great with everyone's pain and grief. but sometimes the image of a 10 year old coems to ur mind, if u hear some people talk to chris or even wyatt... if u did this with intention... aw but also abit of aw to the poor guys... ebing pampered ta that age ;) |
| Lisa 2004-10-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis story ROCKED MY WORLD! I loved it! I LOVE the happy ending. Once I started reading I was enthralled and could not stop till the end. Thank you for the vivid images!! I need MORE!! |
| Dalakh 2004-08-19 ch 14, | abuse*grins madly* it has a happy ending! it has a happy ending! WO! Great fic! Loved every bit of it! (sorry it took me so long to review the epilogue lol!) |
| cyndrarae 2004-08-17 ch 14, | abuseHey, Just wanted to say this is a great story! I love Chris-centric fics and this is definitely one of the best ever. Loved the interactions with adorable older bro Wy and hey great job with the OCs. I'm myself never sure I'm doing a good job but you handled and developed them very well :) Also, not sure if the first review I did (uptil chapter 9) will EVER get to you! So just wanted to write all that stuff again.. thanks for mentioning me and DSA in your notes *blushes*. I dont mind at all!! Its just an idea and you made great use of it :) Sorry I got to your story so late, I was sorta trying Not to read any Charmed fics at all until DSA was complete but.. obviously i couldnt stick to it hehe :P Great job! Are you writing another Chris story? :) cheers, Cyndra |
| ilovedrew88 2004-08-16 ch 14, | abuseThat was great. I'm glad Hope and Chris get to finally be together. Chris deserves love. Awesome story. Really loved it. |
| sailorwind 2004-08-15 ch 14, | abuseAw. Finally, Chris gets a happy ending. He deserves it. |
| Sarah-Jane 2004-08-15 ch 14, anon. | abusegreat ending! thank you for my surprise I loved it from zom ;) |
| Ayrlee 2004-08-14 ch 14, anon. | abuseloved it! I'm glad you brought Hope back. Chris is always loveless and it's nice to see him with her. Loved the names you gave the kids btw |
| Haley Starlight 2004-08-14 ch 14, | abuseThis was a really good story, and I'm really bummed to see it end. I hope you start another story soon! So I won't have to suffer too badly! |
| vintagegirl 2004-08-14 ch 14, | abuseyay. you fianlly posted it. I am so happy they were together. I loved the ending. Great story. |
| Bluley 2004-08-14 ch 14, | abuseDefinitely well worth waiting for. I'm a sucker for happy endings and I loved this one, it felt unforced and natural. Zom is a great character and I have always enjoyed Hope, I am happy that she finally is too. I really loved the whole story, it started well and just got better and better as it went along, as for the dedication, to be associated with something this good is really cool. As always, you are far too kind to me. Thank you, it means a lot. |
| OrbingPunk 2004-08-14 ch 14, | abuseYAY! I loved this story! It was so cute. :) Awesome job. |