I liked it! Thanks for the great story.

I'll bet Will is good with his hands in more than one way, say in bed when they are making mad, passionate love? All joking aside, this was a nice little one shot to discribe the logistics of a good marriage. It proves to me that a marriage does not have to be staid and boring. It can be passionate and interesting, in more than one way.

I heard about this story in the magazine "Film Fantasy." It was one of the top ten Pirates finfics, and I can see why! In case you haven't seen it, it says "this magificent vignette poetically addresses the question of what happens next for Mr. and Mrs. Will Turner." It also says that it "takes the breath away," and I agree wholeheartedly!

That... is... awesome! *faveC2s* Just... gah. And everything good everyone else already said, hehe. Except I came across this randomly- from your reviews this was mentioned in a *mag*?! Whoa! Anyways, love the trio-shippy vibe in general! ^_^
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I heard about your story from a magazine and decided to try it out. I must admit that it was not what I expected, but still absolutely amazing. Wonderfully writing.

wow very good story i luv potc...luv the descriptiveness u put into ur writing..

Awesome. Seriously awesome. Did you know that this story is described a "Flight(s) of imagination that takes the breath away" by Film Fantasy magazine with their specail on Dead Man's Chest (which is a great movie)?!
I'd die if a peice of my wirting were displayed in a magazine!

AWESOME JOB!

is that it? I like it. and i want more. i found this in a magizne. so it had to be good and it is.

This was a most beautiful little piece; I think you captured the sense of longing and yet the need for at least a semblance of propriety perfectly. Lovely!

Nice story...I like that you didn't change the characters...even tough Jack is not mentionned, you feel like having the original Jack between the lines...
Be careful tough, with the structure of your story...You've done well with it for your first (!) story...but you still can improve here with the structure. Sometimes you just jump with the characters perspective (will&Liz to servant) or you round up a thought at a strange place (the thing with the twist...maybe it helps you. So I thought to send a feedback like this!
But keep on reading...your language is chosen very well!

Wow, this was so beautiful. It was written wonderfully and the whole thing rings true. Well done.

omg!! this story is great!! It explains Will and Elizabeth perfectly together! And what they do and feel, you explain wonderfly! Good job!! keep it up!

What a fantastic story! I can literally picture this happening as I read it!

Nice. Short. Elegant... and realistic with that sprinkle of bitterness. A pleasure to read, really.

Fantastic. I have never read a story that can be full of both lust for life and deep sadness at the same time. Very excellent writing - quite the treat to read.