 Strul 2006-03-14 . chapter 1 [insert fangirlish squeel]
meow! zomg, this was totally cool ^_^ can't help that I'm squeeling a little. so kyot! really liked the ending. I'm just gonna read it all over again now... |
 PriscillaGirl 2005-12-28 . chapter 1TOTAL CUTENESS I LOVED IT!
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 RLBB 2005-09-12 . chapter 1aw... ^_^
I realy liked how you told the different things Seto did to show different feelings, it was written very well. You so have to do another chapter in Kaiba's POV |
 Sirael Lythling 2005-07-03 . chapter 1 hahahahaha. i want to see this happen in the anime! good fic. |
 mischiefmagnet 2005-06-04 . chapter 1Wow, short but sweet. I really liked it.
I especially enjoyed the part where you catalogued all the little tell-tale indicators for Kaiba's range of emotions. I found it to be very effective writing.
The kiss was great, too. I'm a sucker for a dramatic moment, and kissing in the middle of a hallway in front of a bunch of other students certainly seems to qualify.
So yeah. Nice one. A reverse POV would be nice, too, if you ever get a chance to write it! |
 kitty girl 2005-06-02 . chapter 1 yes please please please please please do another chap with kaiba's point of view please! this was an adorable one shot but it's so much fun to have the same one shot from another characters point of view, please please please please! |
 LeafeKnight7 2005-05-28 . chapter 1Oh! This was cute! It would be very nice if you DID put another chapter. But you dont have to if you dont have the time. ^_^Ja ne! |
 Empressofthedragons 2005-04-20 . chapter 1cute... very cute... ^_^ me likie, i wouldn't mind to see what lil' old Kiaba had to say. i think it would shed a little adorable light o things... but what a kiss! quiet intense. lol! and in front of every body! DUDE! i'd be blushiin' my head off! HA, HA, HA, HA! especially if it was w/ Mr. you-say-something-wrong-and-you-die! lol! oh... that was a good laugh... ^_^ keep up the good work! i like it. |
 yoursolastsummer 2004-10-28 . chapter 1This was wonderful. It was so perfect, I loved how she could read him through his eyes and when he smiled at the end I was so happy. Please do another chapter that would be awesome! |
 Here4TheParty 2004-09-16 . chapter 1aww... i loved it! |
 Late March 2004-09-04 . chapter 1This is a great one shot! I love it! Write more one shots like this soon! |
 Symmentha 2004-08-28 . chapter 1I really enjoyed this story. You did a good job making it seem realistic. Kaiba didn't seem that out of character. I really hope you do a second chapter. |
 Vi 2004-08-12 . chapter 1 man... i love it when you write these romantic scenes of seto and tea; why wont you put this in your "in for a penny" story? you are so GOOD in making kissing scenes hehehe. |
 Cerberuswolf 2004-07-16 . chapter 1HELL YA! At least there are other Seto/Anzu fans out there in the world. Seto/Anzu all the way!*LAUGHS INSANLY*
Ja ne,
Katrina " Wolve" Fox |
 Geniusgirl; The Original 2004-07-08 . chapter 1Absolutely, positively one of the best S/A one-shots in existence. I loved it. There was only one mistake in the final lines:
"The hallway they were currently standing in, had gone eerily silent after the population had seemed them kissed, looking up Anzu was startled to see him shooting his famous death glare at the student body. "
I think this should be:
"The hall way they were currently standiing in had gone eerily silent after the population had seen them kiss. Looking up, Anzu was startled to see him shooting his famous death glare at the student body."
But apart from that, it's fine. I really loved this. I'm putting you on my Favourite Authors list. Keep up the great work and update "In For A Penny" soon!
Tog. |