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Strul
2006-03-14 . chapter 1
[insert fangirlish squeel]
meow! zomg, this was totally cool ^_^ can't help that I'm squeeling a little. so kyot! really liked the ending. I'm just gonna read it all over again now...
PriscillaGirl
2005-12-28 . chapter 1
TOTAL CUTENESS I LOVED IT!

RLBB
2005-09-12 . chapter 1
aw... ^_^
I realy liked how you told the different things Seto did to show different feelings, it was written very well. You so have to do another chapter in Kaiba's POV
Sirael Lythling
2005-07-03 . chapter 1
hahahahaha. i want to see this happen in the anime! good fic.
mischiefmagnet
2005-06-04 . chapter 1
Wow, short but sweet. I really liked it.

I especially enjoyed the part where you catalogued all the little tell-tale indicators for Kaiba's range of emotions. I found it to be very effective writing.

The kiss was great, too. I'm a sucker for a dramatic moment, and kissing in the middle of a hallway in front of a bunch of other students certainly seems to qualify.

So yeah. Nice one. A reverse POV would be nice, too, if you ever get a chance to write it!
kitty girl
2005-06-02 . chapter 1
yes please please please please please do another chap with kaiba's point of view please! this was an adorable one shot but it's so much fun to have the same one shot from another characters point of view, please please please please!
LeafeKnight7
2005-05-28 . chapter 1
Oh! This was cute! It would be very nice if you DID put another chapter. But you dont have to if you dont have the time. ^_^Ja ne!
Empressofthedragons
2005-04-20 . chapter 1
cute... very cute... ^_^ me likie, i wouldn't mind to see what lil' old Kiaba had to say. i think it would shed a little adorable light o things... but what a kiss! quiet intense. lol! and in front of every body! DUDE! i'd be blushiin' my head off! HA, HA, HA, HA! especially if it was w/ Mr. you-say-something-wrong-and-you-die! lol! oh... that was a good laugh... ^_^ keep up the good work! i like it.
yoursolastsummer
2004-10-28 . chapter 1
This was wonderful. It was so perfect, I loved how she could read him through his eyes and when he smiled at the end I was so happy. Please do another chapter that would be awesome!
Here4TheParty
2004-09-16 . chapter 1
aww... i loved it!
Late March
2004-09-04 . chapter 1
This is a great one shot! I love it! Write more one shots like this soon!
Symmentha
2004-08-28 . chapter 1
I really enjoyed this story. You did a good job making it seem realistic. Kaiba didn't seem that out of character. I really hope you do a second chapter.
Vi
2004-08-12 . chapter 1
man... i love it when you write these romantic scenes of seto and tea; why wont you put this in your "in for a penny" story? you are so GOOD in making kissing scenes hehehe.
Cerberuswolf
2004-07-16 . chapter 1
HELL YA! At least there are other Seto/Anzu fans out there in the world. Seto/Anzu all the way!*LAUGHS INSANLY*

Ja ne,

Katrina " Wolve" Fox
Geniusgirl; The Original
2004-07-08 . chapter 1
Absolutely, positively one of the best S/A one-shots in existence. I loved it. There was only one mistake in the final lines:

"The hallway they were currently standing in, had gone eerily silent after the population had seemed them kissed, looking up Anzu was startled to see him shooting his famous death glare at the student body. "

I think this should be:
"The hall way they were currently standiing in had gone eerily silent after the population had seen them kiss. Looking up, Anzu was startled to see him shooting his famous death glare at the student body."

But apart from that, it's fine. I really loved this. I'm putting you on my Favourite Authors list. Keep up the great work and update "In For A Penny" soon!
Tog.
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