If she has the fighting powers of her father then shouldnt she have been able to beat the people who ripped her wings off?

This is a beautiful story :)

this is a really great story that i love very much and like it too. your a really great author who wrote this really great and wonderful story.

wonderful!
ive now succesfully read the entire thing three times! hhahaha thanks for being such a wonderful writer and sharing your skills with us, i appreciate you very much. fabulous plot, though parts got pretty morbid hahaha i loved it loveed it loved it! hahah :) thanks

this story is very good because whenever i see it i read it a millions times over cause it is my favorite besides elves child and the other ones that you did they are all really good and great to read.

aww..that was so sweet! keep it up!!

keep it up

Totally amazing! As are the others I have read of yours. Completely and wholely amazing...

Doomo arigatou!

Saki

The myth you mentioned, while this one might have been chinese the greeks have a similar one where Selene, goddess of the moon falls in love with a sheperd Endymion and seduces him in his sleep. She has daughters with him but the gods discover their relationship and they are forbidden to meet however Selene pleads and eventually is allowed to meet Endymion once a year.

Really cool idea and very original making Kagome an angel from the moon though very sailor moonish, but your writing still has a ways to go until it really shows its potential. You've got a creative mind but you seem to lack some skill. Half your story seems more like a script and the rest like a short story and really, it doesn't work too well. You need to spend more time working on details and showing readers where the characters are and what is happening rather than just stating it plainly, if tenseiga is pulsing don't write pulse but actually say something like: His eyes widened, gaze falling on his hip. The sword, it was pulsing. Or something like that give your fic a bit more life! When writing in characters show their personality and relationships through small scenes that play important parts in the end, add some complexity, and use imagery, metaphores, characterization, setting, themes, motifs, ect... to enrich your story. You've got potential but as for this story, its rather weak and sorry to say, below mediocre.

i sort of liked it-
sort of different
the ending was extremely cliche

the fact that these chapters are so freaking small is ANNOYING ANNOYING ANNOYING>.

she gets her wings back, right?!?!?!?!

that was frickin awesome!

yay^^