|Reviews for Transformation|
| Guest 3/8/13 . chapter 1
that was really good short story
| Demonslave 2/28/13 . chapter 1
I liked it. It made a good story. Hehe even though Luffy was killed *tear drop* it still is very good! :D
| drana0 2/10/13 . chapter 1
So powerful! Only 400 words and this story has so much emotions in it.. Zoro's emotions were so believable and I could picture the last scene in my head. Thank you for this beautiful story.
| Anjelle 1/18/13 . chapter 1
So sad ;_; Poor Zoro...Really powerful, especially considering how short it is. Really well done! I commend you! :D
...I know how it feels to get reviews consisting of complaints of Luffy's dead _; You are brave to be able to bare with it...
| xoxInnerHollowxox 1/2/13 . chapter 1
So...SO well written. And completely and utterly heartbreaking.
I could see something like this happening if Luffy died, I could see Zoro losing it like that.
Great story, amazing work. Keep it up.
| puruku 12/8/12 . chapter 1
Poor Zoro, I can only imagine the anguish he must have felt at that moment...
| Guest 11/27/12 . chapter 1
I love you. :)
You really are an awesome writer. :)
| Chemistry-Deaf 10/28/12 . chapter 1
T-that's a scary scene.
You just gave me something draw.
| Dorito Monkey D. Nyan Cat 9/28/12 . chapter 1
| zairoon 9/6/12 . chapter 1
Aaaaah *sigh* you, authors are always so mean with the poor anime characters... though I shouldn't be one to talk as I did that as well in the past... Anyway.. this was absolutely well written... I like the exactitude (i hope it's english?) of how many people died by Zoro's swords... It's so sad that Luffy died...almost made me sick (yeah yeah), but yeah... I think that if he was to die, Zoro would definitely react like this... so yeah... great drabble! Keep doing the good work!
| JaneDoe0.0 9/3/12 . chapter 1
OMG YOU KILLED LUFFY!11!1!oneone!1!
Nah, I'm totally joking. I understand that sacrifices must be made when the occasion calls. Even though I AM totally grief-stricken that he dies *wail* This was good! Great! Incredible! Sorta. I feel weird describing it this way, since it is so sad. However, I think it is VERY well written :) Nice job!
Even though I support Zoro/Luffy all the way, it doesn't really feel that way to me. I honestly believe that even if Zoro and Luffy weren't in a romantic relationship(which I know they really aren't *sob*), they have a veeeery strong bond and that something like this would definitely happen. It would probably also be similar the other way around. Anyways, like I said, great6 job!
| Starzzu 7/31/12 . chapter 1
Of course I'm sad that Luffy had to get killed of in this story, but at the same time, I'm happy he did. Not happy like: "WOO! YEAH! LUFFY'S DEAD!" But more like: "Luffy got killed . . . but the story was good that way."
If something like that were to ever happen, I would see it happen exactly THIS way. I could imagine Zoro getting so worked up over it that he actually would go on a bloody rampage and kill all the townsfolk. Then he'd cry over Luffy.
Even though Luffy did die, this story was genius.
| Guest 7/18/12 . chapter 1
T_T It's beautiful. Sad, but still beautiful.
PS: I was really tempted to write: "OMG YOU KILLED LUFFY!"
| one hell of an otaku 5/30/12 . chapter 1
i liked it and i can see something like that happening. i mean one or two of them or maybe even more of them would go into a blind rage. overall i love it very well written. thats all ive got to say so until then keep doing great and keep being awesome sincerely one hell of an otaku
| Lyneel 3/31/12 . chapter 1
ah, it hurts... If the situation was real, the grief would have been unbearable, so it's understandable, the pain is endless, it doesn't leave a place to think. Thinking means death to the mind... And Zoro could loose it too - even if Luffy would never want him to become like this...
The cry at the end... It can tear a soul apart
But again, as much as the story is heartbreaking and terrifying, it's beautiful in its odd, twisted way. Though I would rather it didn't ever come close to such a sitation, never in the whole world
So I would rather be looking forward to reading your non-death fics in the future :)