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| happychica 2008-10-04 ch 1,  | abuseI'm sure most people'sfirst reaction was the whole 'how could you thing', but mine was, honestly, '...wonder if he was still smiling when he died?'. I'm not making that up. *sniffs* that's so sad, but somehow...not unbelievable. I think Zolo would snap if someone killed Luffy. He seems rather attached to the kid. Poor guy...u.u |
| xHitsulover. 2008-08-24 ch 1, | abuseomg ! love it. |
| Deception Point 2008-05-01 ch 1, | abuseI thought he was gonna do harakiri (did I say that right?) right there and there hbut this was also nice. to see, what would happen...just in case and when the anime goes shone-ai *lol* ^_^ |
| KamiDarko 2008-04-22 ch 1, | abuseI liked it. |
| little.tel 2008-04-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt is sad that you killed Luffy, and I doubt that he could ever be killed in such a non-impressive way. But Zoro’s response to Luffy’s death is rather perfect. He was the first to meet him, and despite the way they yell at each other the two are good friends. I can easily see Zoro becoming a demon. It was good. Keep writing. |
| Nightmaric 2008-03-08 ch 1, | abuseLuffy~! (wails) I'm actually rather amazed that he CAN be beheaded, considering his rubberiness and all. xD |
| Cindy the Werewolfling 2007-12-25 ch 1, | abuseI can accept even my favorite characters death in a well written story. This was okay, not bad at all, but I can't speak better of something that takes me ten seconds to read. If you wanted to turn it into a multi-chapter angst-fest, I wouldn't complain. |
| Mugiwara 2007-12-21 ch 1, | abuseDon't worry, i feel your pain. Whenever i write a story with a character death they're always like "Your so mean! You killed Zoro/Luffy/some random person!" So yeah...AWESOME story! i love how it ends...it's so...fitting! ^^ |
| roxy071288 2007-12-15 ch 1, | abuseWail: OMFG!! YOU KILLED LUFFY! WWAH! Review: Dude. Awesome. I LOVE mad-and-murderous-with-grief!Zoro...It makes me SQUEE |
| cherrichik 2007-12-14 ch 1, | abusebroke my heart; beautifully written |
| German girl 2007-12-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou know, you really have a talent. I mean, your story is quite short, and there is still everything in it. There´s so much emotion and everything. I loved the line " and people began to die". Wow. Very strong line. You are great and I´d like to rad more. maybe longer stories. |
| syntic 2007-11-28 ch 1, | abuseTalk about gruesomely tragic... that was... shockingly well done. XD Haha. I was automatically taken in by such a strong beginning, and the sad ending of this was a perfect way to top it off. Great job! XD *had goosebumps* |
| crystal cerberus 2007-11-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseomg u killed luffy evil! but nice demonizing zolo |
| lokkish 2007-10-19 ch 1, | abuseTHAT WAS AWSOME! i loved it! it was amazing! I mean it's just WOW! ok i'm good now but that was really really good i loved it!hehe |
| Ripuku 2007-10-14 ch 1, | abuse0.0, *cries whilst staring at the computer* NO! NOT LUFFY!! Poor zoro...that's not fair...T.T |