that was really good short story

I liked it. It made a good story. Hehe even though Luffy was killed *tear drop* it still is very good! :D

So powerful! Only 400 words and this story has so much emotions in it.. Zoro's emotions were so believable and I could picture the last scene in my head. Thank you for this beautiful story.

So sad ;_; Poor Zoro...Really powerful, especially considering how short it is. Really well done! I commend you! :D

...I know how it feels to get reviews consisting of complaints of Luffy's dead _; You are brave to be able to bare with it...

This was...amazing.
So...SO well written. And completely and utterly heartbreaking.
I could see something like this happening if Luffy died, I could see Zoro losing it like that.
Great story, amazing work. Keep it up.

Poor Zoro, I can only imagine the anguish he must have felt at that moment...

I love you. :)
You really are an awesome writer. :)

O_O

T-that's a scary scene.
You just gave me something draw.

holy crap.

Aaaaah *sigh* you, authors are always so mean with the poor anime characters... though I shouldn't be one to talk as I did that as well in the past... Anyway.. this was absolutely well written... I like the exactitude (i hope it's english?) of how many people died by Zoro's swords... It's so sad that Luffy died...almost made me sick (yeah yeah), but yeah... I think that if he was to die, Zoro would definitely react like this... so yeah... great drabble! Keep doing the good work!

OMG YOU KILLED LUFFY!11!1!oneone!1!

Nah, I'm totally joking. I understand that sacrifices must be made when the occasion calls. Even though I AM totally grief-stricken that he dies *wail* This was good! Great! Incredible! Sorta. I feel weird describing it this way, since it is so sad. However, I think it is VERY well written :) Nice job!

Even though I support Zoro/Luffy all the way, it doesn't really feel that way to me. I honestly believe that even if Zoro and Luffy weren't in a romantic relationship(which I know they really aren't *sob*), they have a veeeery strong bond and that something like this would definitely happen. It would probably also be similar the other way around. Anyways, like I said, great6 job!

Of course I'm sad that Luffy had to get killed of in this story, but at the same time, I'm happy he did. Not happy like: "WOO! YEAH! LUFFY'S DEAD!" But more like: "Luffy got killed . . . but the story was good that way."

If something like that were to ever happen, I would see it happen exactly THIS way. I could imagine Zoro getting so worked up over it that he actually would go on a bloody rampage and kill all the townsfolk. Then he'd cry over Luffy.

Even though Luffy did die, this story was genius.

T_T It's beautiful. Sad, but still beautiful.

PS: I was really tempted to write: "OMG YOU KILLED LUFFY!"

i liked it and i can see something like that happening. i mean one or two of them or maybe even more of them would go into a blind rage. overall i love it very well written. thats all ive got to say so until then keep doing great and keep being awesome sincerely one hell of an otaku

ah, it hurts... If the situation was real, the grief would have been unbearable, so it's understandable, the pain is endless, it doesn't leave a place to think. Thinking means death to the mind... And Zoro could loose it too - even if Luffy would never want him to become like this...

The cry at the end... It can tear a soul apart

But again, as much as the story is heartbreaking and terrifying, it's beautiful in its odd, twisted way. Though I would rather it didn't ever come close to such a sitation, never in the whole world

So I would rather be looking forward to reading your non-death fics in the future :)