i really don't like how you've portrayed harry, you make him seem really fickle accepting ginny and the weasleys like that after what they did to him

PLZ continue

LOVELY STORY!

This is the BEST Harry Potter fanfiction I have EVER read. You are a really talented writer who doesn't write nasty or disgusting stuff, (porn, violence etc.) and I respect you for that. I Hope You Keep Writing (especially Harry Potter)!

YEAH TAKE THAT! :P (hehehe)

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:D LAST LINE IS BEST LINE

awesome :D

Personally, I don't find this story credible. While I might (MIGHT) believe that Harry might forgive everything that was done to him by his fair weather friends, I don't believe he would forget. That translates to NOT trusting them to be a major part of his life going forward. Would he acknowledge their existence? Probably. Embrace them & trust them as you have him doing? Not a chance.

For me, this story isn't even remotely believable. Unless Harry is a doormat.

The second time I've read this story (I had a different nickname) but I loved it just as much as the first time!
It's wonderful to see/read how Harry forgives them and I love Hugh!

Thank you for your efforts !

Good job on this. I mean you've got great spelling and grammar, a decent storyline, and you get your point across well. I must admit however that the main theme of this, forgiveness is not one that I agree with in this context. With the amount of betrayal evidenced in this story I would have preferred a theme of redemption. Those Harry is expected to forgive seem to do little to actually make up for what the torture they put him through. He is expected to forgive simply because they feel bad for what they have done (and honestly not that bad as they seem in most scenes to be relatively ok, especially as they are scene joking on occasion). I would have preferred more torment for the betrayers and an indication that they were putting forth extreme efforts to right some of their societies wrongs in order to help ensure such a thing doesn't happen again. I will be the first to admit I am more of an old testament kinda bloke (eye for an eye and all that), but I also believe forgiveness is something that should be earned not simply given as it cheapens it for me. As it is I can't help but wonder what happens the next time something bad happens. They have already promised to be steadfast supporters and have shown a willingness to betray that trust in the past and with the minimal effort they had to put in to recieve forgiveness from Harry, I can't help but see further betrayals in the future... So basically I like what you have written to illustrate your idea even if I do not agree with it. As that is simply more of a difference in personal philosophy I've got to say you have done an excellent job. Keep it up.

I'd think Harry would be setting up orphanages since he has intimate knowledge of just how hard it can be.

great work I really enjoyed it Keep it up I can't wait to see what happens between Harry and Ginny

ended too soon but good