I. Love. This. Story. The verses, the way you wrote it... totally awsome. But you know what is so freaky? One of my best friend's name is Alexandria. We call her Lexi not Lexa but still, freaky... you are bloody awesome.

Very interesting!! I love this story but I've got to get off *pouts* I am so going to finish reading it as soon as possible!!

I read it last week but lack the comp time to write let alone review. Love it. I'm just a sucker for happy endings. As for my story... I can't type it up. My parental units stole my computer privliagees. I can only get online at the library and that has a thirty miniute time limit. So no toime to type. I can email it to you in jpeg form, though. I just hope you can read my handwriting. You can even be my beta if ye really want. Wow... i _never_ let other people beta my work... lucky you... but seriously. Your stories are so great... I bow to your superb ability.

Just tell me if you want to beta it. Chapter three of feeling is twelve pages handwritten. Good luck with that. I am sacnning it today and then will send it to whoever wants to type it for me... Just send me an email. i can only check it once a week, but I will send it off as soon as I get a response.

Now I must get off the computer... Again, great story...

Ah, an interesting ending to an interesting story. It was a fun read all the way through and I look forward to seeing what else you can cook up. Kudos.

--AhiFlame--

“Become Norrington’s wife, Lexa. Blame me as a pirate for what’s befallen you.

*growls and drums fingers on computer table* I'd better get to the next chapter... *grumbles about people killing Jack...*

--AhiFlame--

Yes, it was a rather fluffy ending, but i was glad that Lexa did the right thing for Jack.
I think I would have picked to stay where I was too, especially getting to keep Jack!
Maybe a little OTT with the Love You part.

not a bit o' fluff. a little tear jerky, but sweet. a little not your style, but a welcomed change. *Sniff*Sniff* love it mate.

that was bloody awesome!kudos to ye

Well, MAYBE Jack wouldn't've said exactly those words. It's hard to say. We've never seen Jack in love with a person in a PotC sequel, with any luck, we will come the 2nd or 3rd movie. Even if we don't, we'll just continue putting him in those types of situations. And, do you know why? Because that's the kind of man Jack is to us. Whether it's a Jack/Ana shipper, Jack/Elizabeth, or a Jack/OC, we just do and it's up to the individual author's interpretation of the character to lead him or her into each situation.
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Now, maybe in my mind, my interpretation of Jack might've been more like this...
“I love you, Jack.

O.. such angst and emotion! I LOVED IT! I could just visualize the entire thing! Really was wonderful reading.. I felt the anguish for Jack and the anger of Lexa. O.. that Commodore is NOT a nice man in this story. But then, I really doubt he would be to Jack. *growls at Norrington*..
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At least, however, Jack's not dead. That is the bright side and I'm glad there was one.. for about 1/2 a minute, anyway. LOL..
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Please DO continue! LOVE THIS!
Ta
Jackfn2

Yay!Jack and Lexa reunited for good.I love happy endings.And I love fluff.So if for anything else,don't change the ending for me!I know you won't cuz you love me right? :)

I thought so.

I love that she's afraid of sharks...hehe. It makes her more human. ;)
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And the little poem of clues is a nice touch.

--AhiFlame--

Yay!Jack's still alive.Just one more hurdle to get over.Gotta get him out of the noose.I have faith that Lexa will get the job done though.So no worries.

:O :O :O :O

Well then,good chapter,all considering,that is :)

I'm not so sure I believe you did it though,I think you,mydear,love Jack too much to go through with it.But we'll see eh?Yes we will.Loved the battle though.Lexa is a quick thinker ain't see?Kudos for her.