 SecretlyInInk 2009-07-02 . chapter 2Love the story, but I noticed an error.
The Video Camera Part 1:
"and someone throws a cheep bed-pillow into the room."
It should be cheap, not cheep.
But in all, a very nice story. Original, that's for sure. |
 owlreader 2009-05-28 . chapter 5This is an amazing story! Keep writing! |
 owlreader 2009-05-28 . chapter 1Dreamingfifi:
This is amazing! I absolutely love it!
-owlreader.
p.s. I'm assuming that you are the same dreamingfifi from :) |
 Noruinivnes 2009-04-13 . chapter 5This is a very interesting story (I myself have pondered writing a story of Elves living in the modern world). If you're not too sick of it and ever decide to finish it, I'd be more than happy to read it. :D
Ir i lû telitha,
Noruinivnes |
 Ilada'Jefiv 2008-10-20 . chapter 5This is a great story! I hope you continue it! |
 elentarri 2008-08-29 . chapter 5 A lovely, well written and unusual story. Please continue with it. |
 szepilona10 2008-07-09 . chapter 5This is really interesting! Update soon please!
God Bless!
~Szepilona10~ |
 Iell Eruo 2008-07-09 . chapter 5I'm confused... did I miss a part? It jumps from them leaving Gondor to him running away from something and ending up in Britain.
Other than that... good story! It echoes true. Times were very hard way back when and such as this could very well have happened to any Elves that tried to brave them.
~Iell Eruo |
 Dark Rose of Heaven 2008-07-08 . chapter 5This is really extraordinary. I'm so glad you're updating again! :) Wonderful job, I really enjoy your writing style.
DR |
 ShimmeringWater 2008-07-06 . chapter 4I love this plot!! Seriously, one proof of this is that regardless of the time that has passed since the last time I read about the characters I still remember what they have been through. Finish it,
hugs |
 The Queen of Confusion 2008-06-23 . chapter 4Great chapter! Hope to see more soon!
SARAH |
 PurpleHat 2008-06-23 . chapter 4This absolutely compelling. I can't wait for the next chpter of "David's" story. |
 szepilona10 2008-06-22 . chapter 4That is so sad! I liked it and I am very happy that you updated! I was thinking that you never would! Thank you and please update soon!
God Bless!
~Szepilona10~ |
 The Dancing Cavalier 2008-05-25 . chapter 3This is to cool! |
 The Ginger Muffins 2008-04-29 . chapter 3Wow, I absolutely love how this story is playing out! It's only gone a little ways so far, but the format was established really early, which was great. I can imagine this in my head like a documentary-styled Hollywood film. One of the good films! I adore the connections between our world and Arda, meeting Tolkien in the trenches.
Please continue! |