Love the story, but I noticed an error.
The Video Camera Part 1:
"and someone throws a cheep bed-pillow into the room."
It should be cheap, not cheep.
But in all, a very nice story. Original, that's for sure.

This is an amazing story! Keep writing!

Dreamingfifi:
This is amazing! I absolutely love it!
-owlreader.
p.s. I'm assuming that you are the same dreamingfifi from :)

This is a very interesting story (I myself have pondered writing a story of Elves living in the modern world). If you're not too sick of it and ever decide to finish it, I'd be more than happy to read it. :D

Ir i lû telitha,
Noruinivnes

This is a great story! I hope you continue it!

A lovely, well written and unusual story. Please continue with it.

This is really interesting! Update soon please!
God Bless!

~Szepilona10~

I'm confused... did I miss a part? It jumps from them leaving Gondor to him running away from something and ending up in Britain.

Other than that... good story! It echoes true. Times were very hard way back when and such as this could very well have happened to any Elves that tried to brave them.

~Iell Eruo

This is really extraordinary. I'm so glad you're updating again! :) Wonderful job, I really enjoy your writing style.
DR

I love this plot!! Seriously, one proof of this is that regardless of the time that has passed since the last time I read about the characters I still remember what they have been through. Finish it,
hugs

Great chapter! Hope to see more soon!

SARAH

This absolutely compelling. I can't wait for the next chpter of "David's" story.

That is so sad! I liked it and I am very happy that you updated! I was thinking that you never would! Thank you and please update soon!
God Bless!

~Szepilona10~

This is to cool!

Wow, I absolutely love how this story is playing out! It's only gone a little ways so far, but the format was established really early, which was great. I can imagine this in my head like a documentary-styled Hollywood film. One of the good films! I adore the connections between our world and Arda, meeting Tolkien in the trenches.

Please continue!