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ScifiSOS
2008-07-28 . chapter 8
lolz should have done a freebe lemon and i'd give you a cookie. or two. jk jk. eh it was good while it lasts. =d i'll just eat these cookies then. *chomps* have a nice day ;3 XD
Saturn-Lily
2008-04-06 . chapter 8
Clearly no one knows what your last chpater meant by the reviews, lol
anways great story evenouthgh you never finished. Glad harry and Draco are together, good pairing, love them together
Reyinn
2006-09-20 . chapter 7
MUST UPDATE!
wondererx
2006-07-26 . chapter 7
so harry doesn't love ron... how is he going to break up with ron then?
and didn't the 'lover' in his dream have blue eyes? draco has mercury... is it blaise then? that shoud be interesting...

or is harry going back to tom in the end? huh...

i love your story! furck the others who don't like it; the plot's great and i'm dying to read the rest of this!

keep writing!
after sex cigarette
2005-12-29 . chapter 7
But he couldn’t. Not yet. Maybe not ever. Harry needed Ron. Needed the safety, the assurance. Needed something to focus on.-so familiar, and one of the most poignant, painful lines you have here. I loved the begining paragraph, it was that blur of color that swept me back into this, with bated breath. You do an amazing job at the darkness, frustration, desperation, and pain in all of them without being overpowering.
Purple Raveness
2005-12-28 . chapter 7
awesome!
CaleyW
2005-11-04 . chapter 6
Great fic so far. I really liked the first one. Just finished reading all six chappies of this one too. Very nice. I like the HP/RW pairing you've set up. It's so cute.
So, any mean DE gonna get Harry at the Malfoy Manor, or is he home free for now? Is "Today" coming soon?
I know you're busy and this is a work in progress, but I hope you finish this one some day.
~Jimmy
mikomi bansiki
2005-10-07 . chapter 3
yeah, you love ever after too! sque!
KAWAIIwolf-luvr
2005-08-29 . chapter 6
#tear# Are you ever going to update?!?! #runs off crying# I reslly like this story!!
Sakura-Inc
2005-01-28 . chapter 6
I really like the sequel. And the sexual tension between Harry and Draco.
Poor Macabre! I hope you give him another pet snake, because how can someone live without a pet snake?
Love the Larundo character too.

I am waiting desperately on the new chapter.

Ciao, and good luck,

Sarah-
Dragenphly
2005-01-27 . chapter 6
Lovin it - although the Ron/Harry pairing makes my stomach churn. Hopefully, the curse will make Ron leave Harry for Blaise (however improbable it sounds) and leave Harry to be free with Draco. Happy Ending. Please? The story doesn't have to be happy as long as the ending is...*begs* Anyway, loved this chapter - I love reading about Harry having to learn about his family assets and stuff, it's always so interesting. Keep it up!
shindaat
2004-11-24 . chapter 6
Wow, I can change my name now! :o

The former Uuari speaking, with yet another review fawning over the great work of TGP. :)

:D I love this fic! It's so well illustrated, so... slash! XD I can't get enough of it, seriously.

Harry's outfit sounds cool. :/ I should go check if you've drawn anything for it. I wanna see! :O
goddess of darkness3
2004-11-01 . chapter 6
very interesting story!
poor harry!
please write more soon!
Fitful Fantasy
2004-10-15 . chapter 6
Snape has a daughter?! But he snogs Remus, never thought he'd get close enough to a women to...reproduce. o.o'
truthxinxshadow
2004-10-14 . chapter 6
Very nice. Love it. It's almost as cool as sex, but not quite. Especially not sex between Harry and Draco. ::drools:: So hot. Nice story, update as soon as you can!!
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