OMFG! Well versed in history AND astrology AND a talented writer! Please keep this story going. Wow, you're even being true to the characters! I am proud to be your fellow human being. Really, not just gushing, I swear. Keep up the good work, look forwar to reading the next chapter,

Lilah

wow, I really love how original and well written this story is! :-) interesting idea to have kik younger lol keep up the great work! I can't wait for the next ch! _

That was great update soon! Ja

I absolutely can't stand you now! how could you start a story that's actually half decent and then just stop writing all together. ! I can't stand people like you or let me re-prase that, I can't stand you!

"Yay! I’ve finally updated! pats herself on the back". it would be nice to actually have you update again!

Awsome chapter! I was so excited that you finally updated, and I wasn't disapointed. I can't wait until the next chapter. _

you have one of the few fan fics that I actually like so plz update!...P.S I'm getting really sick of people starting stories and not finishing it!

I honestly think your story is good but if you don't hurry up and update i will start o notice annoying little faults!

Ah Anie you updated! yayness.

Lmao syphilis or gonorrhea! Hahaha that just cracked me up. Aww Inu coming to the rescue, how cute...

Hm. Constructive criticism? When you're writing, try to imagine the actual characters in your mind and think about what they'd say... like I'm not sure I've actually heard someone say, “You wouldn’t dare.” -shrug- But that's it. _ That comes with time.

Great job so far! Thankies for updating.

-mysachan

Well, it certainly took ya long enough, but...

WHOO, UPDATE!

Me'sa liked, but pwease dun take that long next time. *puppy eyes*

I dont think I can come up with any constructive criticism to give you at this point, but I can tell you I really really enjoy this fic. I can't wait until the next chapter! .

Though I'm still a bit confused as to who's from which region, this story has a good start. I look forward to seeing where it goes.

holy sh-! that was amazing! and pal...poor pal seriously he had protected them that was so unexpected. seriously you have got to finish this story i have got to finsih reading this its AWESOME! PLEASE UPDATE SON!

Woohoo, an update! *Cheers* Good chapter, nice and long again.

Update soon, please! -

he hee, Categories. That was really funny. Is "Pal" Miroku? You said he was a lecher... I hope not cuz you just killed him off. I thought you made Inuyasha really in-character, since he always has to be the best and all. He could use a good dose of humility. I really liked this chapter! update soon.