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omh666
2009-06-09 . chapter 12
So when do you plan on updating your story? I think 3 and a half years is enough time to rest.
omh666
2009-06-09 . chapter 10
If the rest of the story is like what this chapter has started then I fully take back my comment about no conflict. This was an amazing ** chapter. Although I would like to know why didn't you have the group of people in the shield charm use some spells? You had Harry tell them that spells could get out, but you didn't use that in the story?
omh666
2009-06-09 . chapter 9
Ok I guess I'll take some of that last review back. I still feel that there is to little conflict, but at least you have some in there.
omh666
2009-06-09 . chapter 8
Is there going to be any conflict at all? I mean what the hell, Harry is able to keep up 5 blocks with no wand and no practous, but Dumbledor can only do 2 with a wand and that would be pushing his power to it's limmet? What the hell are you trying to do? A story with out conflict is a paper with ink nothing more.
omh666
2009-06-09 . chapter 2
You make life too easy. I don't know what else to say.
tar heels superstar
2009-06-03 . chapter 12
good story so update soon and keep writing.
DragonFire Princess
2009-05-15 . chapter 12
Love the story, Hope you'll update ASAP!
blklover
2009-04-11 . chapter 12
great story please kkeep up the good work update soon
crystal denham
2009-03-07 . chapter 12
i really like this story... please write more son...
witchINtheMaKiNg
2008-10-07 . chapter 12
Unix?! Hm...sounds really very interesting. I do wish though that you would give more about this. It's seems like a really breathtakingly beautiful creature.

Well I just saw the last update date and it looks like you have abandoned this story. I really hope that is not the case. It sounds like a very good story and I hope you would will update this story sometime soon!

I want to go check your other stories...

I really do hope you update soon!
witchINtheMaKiNg
2008-10-07 . chapter 11
Merlin accepting he is egoistic? I laughed my head off!
witchINtheMaKiNg
2008-10-07 . chapter 10
He blocked the killing curse?! You better have good explanation for that!

Padfoot and Moony are back! well I always hoped it would eithe be Padfoot, Prongs and Moony or just Moony!
witchINtheMaKiNg
2008-10-07 . chapter 9
A connection with Dumbledore that is always open?! **...he might get in trouble for that! So Ginny is really going to be Harry's girl soon? I can't wait.
witchINtheMaKiNg
2008-10-07 . chapter 8
Holy crap! Harry sound really dreamy...I wish there is Umbitch...oops Umbridge's trial is there in the next chapter.

So harry is becoming the best ever brother?! well don't siblings usually fight worst than cats and dogs?!
witchINtheMaKiNg
2008-10-07 . chapter 7
Binding ceremony sounds very interesting...I can't wait to get to the next chapter, so this is not much of a review!
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