cute~!

I agree with chu, like this is the FIRST Death-Note fanfiction ever!

my oh my, that was brilliantly adorable. cute with the calculating intelligent undertones the characters are known for.
this is probably the oldest death note fic ive ever read, from before there was a section, wow. im so very glad that one of the first fic out there was of such high quality.

YAY, cute!!:D So this was the first DN fanfic ever:P Quite a good one, isn't it? It has something...Original...Even if you forget the fact that this is the first one. Funny is, you somehow seem to get certain...trends in ways of describing things (L is now usually called 'cute' instead of 'wild':3 I think both, but especially cute^^), choice of words (Light is always called 'the brunette', which I doubt if it's actually masculine (Blonde/Blond), but...I use it too^^), and other things:P I just like this fic, I like part 3 of the manga so much:D Light and L's meeting!!:D I love this fic^^ And perfect how thanks to this one this DN-category was born:D

Oh my KIRA! I bow to you *bows* My reason is that you were the first person to put Death Note fanfiction on :D And for that here *holds out the Death Note yaoi/Hentai game* I wish I had it. :D Hee

this fic is so old but it is so good

Wow. The first Death Note fanfcition was LxRaito. I feel proud. XD
It was beauiful, by the way.

OMG, congrats, Cheryl-chan xD
Your story is the first Death Note fanfic... and it kicks butt!
Great job!

Like all who have said it before me, the characterization is phenomenonal xD Awesome!

~ellelauliette

I'm assuming you're not going to keep this up since it's been 4 years! lol.. thanks for starting the death note fan fic! Now there's over 6,0 stories!! =P YAY!

It has a nice ending as it is-
But I wondn't mind seeing what else you come up with for this.

please continue! its too good a beginning chapter to waste! and i agree, we do need more DN fics!! i love the L here and i love raito too! i love your characterisation!

It is a VERY good fic. Some slips now and then, but very good nonetheless. I think it's cool as a one-shot, but if you have some ideas, you should continue it.

Nice, it made me laugh at the beginning, and then I simply had to smile, thanks for that, I really needed it after tiring day.

(okay, it also almost made worse my headache, xD You see, I'm not english, and there still were some words, that I had to check)

YES! I was looking for good Death Note fics, and I saw you writing DN fics and I was like "AH! A good author writing DN fics?! I MUST READ!"

You did very well =D

I think you should continue, this is a good fic, just as long as long as you don't go Emo on me.