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sara =3
2008-07-31
ch 1, anon.
abuseLMAO OMFG! I thgought it was totally kakashi the whole time!! I read the Gai part and I laughed so loud that my dog started barking and my nieghbors dog ... it was sexy till the end lol xD
HOMG
2008-07-23
ch 1, anon.
abuseXDLOL
Rosoku-san (Logged out)
2008-03-26
ch 1, anon.
abuseOHMYGODHOLYEFFINGDUCKSOFCHILETHEWORLDHASGONEINSANE.

That was hilarious. I swear I screamed in terror and then snort/laughed for five straight minutes and then gaped like a fish.

This should be rated 'FS' for ** SEXY.

Mehehehehehehe...that was cool.
gilraen88
2008-03-04
ch 1,
abuseoh gods you crush me with the ending xD couldn't stop laughing for at least 5 minutes xP totally loved the yaoi thoe so I hope you wright some of that some more ;DD
Childe at Heart
2008-02-26
ch 1,
abuseOkay, so, honestly, the only phrase that comes to mind at the moment is "Oh my god." Which I did in fact repeat out loud about ten times after I reread the final line three times and finally clicked the review button. That was... traumatic, in a decidedly good way. I must now go and force my sister to read it XDD
Sythe
2008-01-31
ch 1, anon.
abuseI couldn't believe that! That was a complete SQUICK! I was practically screaming in horror at the last sentence. Oh my god!
NiChee
2008-01-28
ch 1,
abuseOH MY GOD! 0_o *very unpleasant shudder*

ROFL
shinabui
2008-01-25
ch 1,
abuseLMAO! omg omg, ok brain is forever damaged with that image of naruto and gai XD lmfao
Dark-Angel-Emrys
2007-12-06
ch 1,
abuse...you made me twitch...

XD

-Emrys-
sk
2007-11-25
ch 1, anon.
abuseokay that was just wrong and strangly funny why did you do this it scared me
twinkle-twilight
2007-11-07
ch 1,
abusehaha i just reslised this aft i read the sumary.. but it's kakanaru pairing.. WHY THE HELl WAS IT THT GAI WAS THE ONE SAYING I LOVE YOU??! sry.. it just seems weird... ...
DedicatedReader
2007-09-24
ch 1,
abuse...*blink...blnk-blink*...I'm stunned, for lack of a better word... Still good though...*passes out from shock in a dark corner*
PochiMicky
2007-09-04
ch 1,
abuseHaha, this is so ridiculous!
You had me there for a moment, hahaha.
Good job! Totally unexpected. xD

-kath
nvrwsndnvrwllb
2007-08-17
ch 1,
abuse..thank you for scarring me emotionally, mentally and physically (..I bit down on my lip so hard so I wouldn't scream in utter terror, it bled..)

..it was very well written, to say the least.


..now, excuse me while I go twitch uncontrollably for the rest of the night.
amberblood
2007-05-31
ch 1,
abuse*dies laughing*
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