It's great to see some Langrisser fics here. Career Soft games are tragically ignored, IMO. This is the only place I've ever found any Langrisser fics, and I've yet to find a single Growlanser fic.

Anyways, it's a nice story, though I would've preferred a Landius/Angelina fic (of course, as you are no doubt well aware, who to pair with Landius in L4 is a matter of personal preference)