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xxBittersweet Melancholyxx
2009-08-05 . chapter 1
Oh wow,I cried so hard.
The concept is amazing,I thought it had a really bittersweet taste to it,and I liked how you played Naruto,Sasuke,Kakashi,and everybody out well to what you think they would have reacted at that point in the time line.. I thought the plot in this fanfic was amazing,and so heartbreaking. I enjoyed it,and thought this was aa fantastic read. Thank you,and hope you make more reader-connection-relation stories like this,it was heart warming.
Romancelover1321
2009-04-18 . chapter 2
I found this saying so true. We always know death is lurking and no matter how we try to prepare for it, were never ready when it comes. Everybody grieves different. Good job.
Jaseybubbleface-chan
2009-04-04 . chapter 2
this is soo touching,
defiantly one of the best fics on
for sure.
Daniela
2009-03-31 . chapter 2
Omg this is one of the best stories I've read.! I personaly have lost a friend recently and I just started crying cuz I went through he same thing as sasuke holding it all in but finally breAking down...thankyou for being such a good writer...
Totally Not Pyro
2009-01-15 . chapter 2
OMG, so sweet and sad. I really like this.
Nixie002
2008-11-20 . chapter 2
Nice story. Sad that Sakura had to die but it was a nice portrayal of Sasuke's sadness and guilt. The ending was great. I would have been annoyed if Sasuke ended up losing is other friend too.
-delicate.desires
2008-10-25 . chapter 2
Aw, I actually cried. I hope I wasn't the only one one. This was a really good story!
Arrgh-matey
2008-10-25 . chapter 2
crying.
crying a lot.


help
Gaby
2008-10-23 . chapter 2
I'm blinking back the tears as I write this. This is the first fanfiction I've ever read that touched me this way.

Beautiful...simply beautiful.
artmusicpassion
2008-08-17 . chapter 2
i cried so hard. this is beautiful.
Lifestyle
2008-08-12 . chapter 2
Wonderfully written. I'm actually glad you decided to divide it into two separate chapters, to show Naruto and Sasuke delt with the pain in their own separate ways.

Nice :)
yusuko
2008-08-04 . chapter 2
wow! that was the most realistic fanfic I've read in a long time. Also one of the saddest. You really portrayed everyone as they are. Perfect!
Contrariwise
2008-07-20 . chapter 2
Thank God Kakashi was there. He was right. Sasuke's "narrow-minded and stubborn." And he cannot "deal with death."

But at least Sasuke opted for the latter choice: stop blaming himself and to remember her for how she lived. And for what she gave up for him. For them all.

*smiles bitterly*

Have I mentioned I cried for this fic?

But it was all worth it.
bally2cute
2008-07-14 . chapter 2
It has been a while since this was written, but I'll leave a review anyway. I like how you kept the characters themselves despite the situation. I good really see Sasuke acting the way he did in the first half of this story. I think the second half of the story was better written than the first. I like the past and present segments, they were pieced together beautifully with the last sentence of each different segment. I could just feel something building during the "training" session between Kakashi-sensei and Sasuke. The breaking down came, but you kept Sasuke in character for that. This was a wonderful read, and I thank you for sharing.
K.D.
2008-06-11 . chapter 2
You did a great job on finding the characters, how they would react to such a situation. It seemed so believable, what could happen, what they would say, how they dealt with it. I've been reading Naruto fanfics for a while but I never read any that was so in character as this one even that something so drastic happened that most wouldn't know how they would react. I was very impressed with your writing. I hope you continue to write, it was a pleasure (yet sad) reading it.

K.D.
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