|Reviews for The Mourning After|
| hangmeuptodry 2/27/13 . chapter 2
First things first, your title is genius.
Also, I really enjoyed your characterization. Naruto is so open with his feelings and Sasuke had always been secretive. The way try behave just makes sense. Kakashi just deals with it the best way he can, by consoling the both of them. He gets them.
Beautiful job, really.
| mndstjohn 2/7/13 . chapter 2
| woa 9/8/12 . chapter 2
That ending! God woman / alien / man
That really made Me wanna cry for a second and I haven't cried in years! Best death fic I've ever read. It was really sad and you got the characters down pact. And it wasn't some weird one shot either so holy fuck thanks for writing this!
| Sis 7/31/12 . chapter 2
| Sailor GaOn Donut 4/24/12 . chapter 2
nice and sad
| JoanIncarnate 11/23/11 . chapter 1
i think your writing style is extraordinary and you did a great job making the characters in character.
| throw.some.glitter.on.it 10/23/11 . chapter 2
This was amazing!
Very well done :)
| tian.kong 7/15/11 . chapter 1
7 years later and my heart still constricts after reading this story. you are such a fantastic writer.
| een nihc 6/16/11 . chapter 2
Beautifully written, the characterization of everyone is perfect here. The ending was bittersweet but it had brought hope that everyone can finally move on. Great masterpiece.
| Ggh 4/26/11 . chapter 2
That was really beautiful.
| TillyMe 2/21/11 . chapter 2
I love it
| XxXxFading DreamxXxX 1/13/11 . chapter 2
Wow this story is amazing.
The ending is sad but happy at the same time...
| Payce D. Elui 11/27/10 . chapter 2
That was... beautifully written. The scene with Sakura's parents, all the little details and the realism in how the remainders of Team 7 reacted. You pulled that off perfectly. Naruto's reaction was done well but the second chapter with the focus on Kakashi and Sasuke totally blew me away. How tragic. And the ending... well you ended it perfectly. I have no shame in saying that the ending made me a little teary, heh.
Thanks for writing that.
| Cinma 11/14/10 . chapter 2
It's actually been a while since I've written a review for someone... well, that isn't particularly true. I should probably say I don't write them OFTEN, mainly out of pure laziness but I had to leave a comment. I had to. Although it's been about six(?) years since you've written this, it's still as meaningful as the first time you've posted it. The characters were hauntingly realistic, and it amazes me how you were able to force Sasuke's emotions out without stepping the least bit out of character.
And Kakashi's constant provoking? Fantastic. I honestly cannot wrap my mind around this. Seriously, you're a awesome writer. I would've thought up another word for "awesome" but it's late and I have no idea what I'm rambling about anymore.
Hopefully you still continue writing despite how busy you are now!
| Elena 11/3/10 . chapter 2
I cried like I haven't cried in AGES, while reading a fic! Oh my god! The way you portrayed Naruto's and Sasuke's way of mouring is simply heartbreakingly beautiful! Loved it!