Reviews for The Mourning After

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pinkLaLa-o3 2008-07-20 ch 2,	abuseThank God Kakashi was there. He was right. Sasuke's "narrow-minded and stubborn." And he cannot "deal with death." But at least Sasuke opted for the latter choice: stop blaming himself and to remember her for how she lived. And for what she gave up for him. For them all. smiles bitterly Have I mentioned I cried for this fic? But it was all worth it.
bally2cute 2008-07-14 ch 2,	abuseIt has been a while since this was written, but I'll leave a review anyway. I like how you kept the characters themselves despite the situation. I good really see Sasuke acting the way he did in the first half of this story. I think the second half of the story was better written than the first. I like the past and present segments, they were pieced together beautifully with the last sentence of each different segment. I could just feel something building during the "training" session between Kakashi-sensei and Sasuke. The breaking down came, but you kept Sasuke in character for that. This was a wonderful read, and I thank you for sharing.
K.D. 2008-06-11 ch 2, anon.	abuseYou did a great job on finding the characters, how they would react to such a situation. It seemed so believable, what could happen, what they would say, how they dealt with it. I've been reading Naruto fanfics for a while but I never read any that was so in character as this one even that something so drastic happened that most wouldn't know how they would react. I was very impressed with your writing. I hope you continue to write, it was a pleasure (yet sad) reading it. K.D.
xImCharmedx 2008-05-09 ch 2,	abuseoh my! that was so sad, i almost cried! and trust me, it takes a lot in writing to make me cry. very very good fic.
WeirdOne7 2008-03-10 ch 2,	abuseOh, wow, that was so sad! Good job!
the tomato 2007-09-27 ch 2,	abusethat was cool yet extremly sadning...must go read sasusaku to feel better good job though
TakemenowTish 2007-08-06 ch 2,	abuseThat was one of the saddest fictions i have EVER read. Fantastic Job
LutraShinobi 2007-07-31 ch 2,	abuseThis is a beautiful story, nice ending too. I especially like the role Kakashi plays in reconciling Sasuke and Naruto with Sakura's death. It seems to me that people sort of ignore Kakashi in favour of Naruto, Sasuke and Sakura, but he's really just as huge a part of Team 7 as any of them, and he contributes to the team in ways that his students don't even notice, sometimes. I think you made Sasuke and Naruto's reactions to their teammate's death very realistic, with lots of description and no OOCness, so great job! :)
happy-making 2007-07-20 ch 2,	abusethis story waz so good it made me cry. kudos.
kay 2007-07-02 ch 2, anon.	abuseWords cannot describe this fanfic. It could not be any better. It is beautifully written and brilliantly realistic-something hard to find. I love it. I'm speechless.
kaeruxchan 2007-06-16 ch 2,	abuseoh my gosh :( that was so sad. i loved it
wff-writer 2007-06-14 ch 2,	abusesniffle! That was hella good and sad. You are an excellent writer and this story is proof of it. The way sasuke finally admites what's up was well played out! I adored reading this story and i bet everyone else who's read it feels the same. ^_^
Shio - Bliss Co 2007-05-16 ch 2,	abuseso beautiful it made me cry
yessirrrr 2007-05-12 ch 1, anon.	abusewow...this one-actually two shot was amazing. i even cried. ha. you explained the characters very well and your writing made a sort of sense(don't know if im using the right word ha) that amde me keep reading and reading. good job[=
Uzamaki-Girl 2007-04-25 ch 1,	abuseReread this story again, still can't get over how awesome it was.

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