 MRMenaMRM 5/11/12 . chapter 8Wow maybe I should have looked through your stories when I said it was on the other site who knew it was here as well:) As I said before if it weren't for you I NEVER would have found this site and I've come to love it!_ Thank you and you should really consider updating this you have lots of readers and I found this over a year ago on your other site so I'd like to know Vegeta's reaction well this is DEFINATELY going on my favs list so please update! |
 Bulma3678 4/8/12 . chapter 8OMG YOUR HERE! I read this fanfic on the other site! This was the very first fanfic I read! Please update this, you have no idea how much it means to me! Now your in my favorites! |
 anon 8/15/11 . chapter 1 When is chapter 9 coming out? |
 stephanie 6/16/11 . chapter 8 ok ive been looking at the other revies and they all been waiting dude even one for 4 years i hope u did not abandon the story cuz i loved it this was my first fanfic story that i read i started two day ago and i love the story sooo much plzzz when u can put up chapt9 we are all waiting! :) |
 stephanie 6/16/11 . chapter 8 i loved it! is there a chaptor9? |
 dez 7/19/09 . chapter 8 dude pleasse update me and my friends have been waiting to finnish thiss since 04 WE WANNA KNOOW |
 dez 3/13/09 . chapter 6 dude wheres chapter nine ive been waiting to read it since middle school and im now a junior in highschool ive also got my friends hooked and we're all waiting srry i just wanna read it |
 R. Yiruma 2/15/09 . chapter 8this was the VERY FIRST fanfic i EVER read. this is what started my fanfic reading and writing journey. i read this on another websit though. everyday i used to get online just to read it. ah the good ol middle school/high school days.
i must say that this is my favorite fanfic of all time .. !
people who havent finished reading it should definately google it. :)
you are the best ! |
 DBZ maineak 2/8/08 . chapter 8i read your story on the internet and i was soo happy to see it here! i cantwait for the next chap! |
 Jolivhanna 11/19/07 . chapter 1Mr. Jacobson, this is honestly one of the best stories I have ever read - and not just out of fanfiction, but any fiction! It is very well structured and very good detail and everything - I especially like chapter 6 "Club Zero" (Krillin teaching Vegeta to dance was just fantastic), and the last chapter so far "Winter Wonderland". I am really curious to see the next chapter "When You're Gone", I want to know how Vegeta takes Bulma's news! We'd all certainly appreciate it.
Also, I think Vegeta's character was excellent, not "OOC" at all - he's had much more "OOC" moments in the actual series! and I think he's perfectly capable in canon of being romantic with Bulma (only when nobody else is around, of course).
9.5/10 is my rating. Thank you for such a great story, and keep writing too! |
 dez 8/26/07 . chapter 8 dude i love the fanfic but u need 2 finnish chapter 9 its been like 4 years man wat did u abandon the fanfic or wat |
 ImaSpaceKitty 8/4/05 . chapter 8aw! that's cute! but what HELL is with the cliffy you bastard! JK i loved it! |
 InuSaiyan007 12/1/04 . chapter 8hey, awesome story! its one of my favorites! this isn't the first time i've read it, i first read it on ur website and when i found out it was also posted here i decided that i would review u. and i'm sorry cuz i'm a certain person that emailed u and instant messaged u before asking when u would write ch.9 and i'm pretty sure that was annoying. well i guess thats all for now.
'til next time_ |
 Petta 6/4/04 . chapter 8 To be honest I've followed this for a long time, It's great and I wondered when you would put it here. |
 Tima 5/13/04 . chapter 1 I read it 2 years ago and went to find it again.., I missed your story.. There's a time when you ask us to play a song.. Ode to my family.. and it's perfect!
Congrats! |