 TheBoltShapedScar 2006-07-25 . chapter 1Very very wellwritten... It's very likely that Hermione would fill out the time in that way, making a rutine of simple games and stuff. Very sad of course, but nice. |
 animerocksjapanrocks 2005-10-15 . chapter 1this is good |
 EVR 2005-08-14 . chapter 1That was so sad, and moving. Excellent job. |
 Contrarian 2005-05-19 . chapter 1I love it. This is a really interesting idea, and I especially like how it didn't end with Harry coming, mean as it may sound.
And the thing with the button - I've heard of that! I went on a tour of Alkatraz (do doubt spelled horribly wrong) and a former prisoner on the recording I was listening to said that he did the exact same thing to pass the time in solitary confinement. Seeing it in the story was a surprise, but it really fits.
Anyway, great job with this. You're really talented. Everyone was in character and I loved the details. *adds to favorites* |
 padfoot'smoon 2005-05-12 . chapter 1plzplzplz write more!I love it ! |
 Dynobunny 2005-03-23 . chapter 1 aww I really like it
you are a great author
Dynobunny:) |
 kerryblaze 2005-02-16 . chapter 1Fantastic! |
 Mystic Phoenix 2005-01-26 . chapter 1wow depressing, good though. First fic I read about anyone but Harry, Sirius or Snape in azkaban.., I really like your take on hermione
Dana (from java chat) |
 Sheri Dust 2005-01-26 . chapter 1wow - that was really RAELLY good! I like how in character you kept Hermione. The button game was SO sad but so clever!
Good story!
-Shez |
 dnd4ever 2004-10-28 . chapter 1Wow that is a one shot, It could be the first chapter to a full length fic. |
 Hannah C. Thaw 2004-08-09 . chapter 1how sad. |
 hogwartsian hobbit 2004-06-18 . chapter 1 This made me cry, just to let you know. I'm glad you didn't end it with a miraculous rescue. Ron has to be my favorite charcter after Remus and Sirius (rip) and seeing him being brought to such a pathetic state of being made me sob. Its excellent. One quick question though. McGonagall is an animagus- wouldn't she be able to escape as Sirius had? Forget about it though- it would ruin your plot. Thank you for a great read. *schnoogles*
-hobbit |
 gpotter 2004-06-08 . chapter 1Wow, you were right: this wasn't a happy tale. But you are a brilliant writer, so far I've read all the stories up to this one and they're all amazingly good. I like how this one doesn't make everything work out in the end, as morbid as that sounds. I would love for you to read one of my stories if you have time, it would be great to have the opinion of such an awesome writer! |
 Noquasi 2004-06-01 . chapter 1Oh, this is so good! You're a brilliant writer, and I can't wait to read the rest... it's so sad! You've done such a good job, there aren't many stories that I'm truley interested in continuing to read after the first chapter, but yours is defidently one of them! Good job so far! |
 CrazyPoet 2004-06-01 . chapter 1Oh wow, what a brilliantly written story! These are becoming so rare. I go through whole pages of stories before I find one I'm willing to read, and this was definitely worth a look. You're an excellent writer, and very imaginitive. You've given me inspiration for my own story I'm working on, thanks! I hope you'll continue this out into a full fledged story, it has such great potential. Nice work! |