Very heartwarming. Could've been extended out a little but a good story.

You have written such a sweet story about love and faith. Is this the end? Because I can't wait to read more from you.

Good chapter.I enjoyed reading it.Ja.

aw...so KAwaii!

Good fic so far.Hope you update it soon.Ja.

this is good...will Arus still be attacked? Will Allura be kidnapped just when Keith is coming back?!!
I'll stay tuned!
Good story!!
Ja ne!!

I am so glad I stumbled upon your story! It is so sweetly written. You have shown their strength as a team, even in the absence of their leader and the power of prayer. Very well done! Keep up the great work and I can't wait to read more.

really enjoying this so far. can't wait to read more. please continue soon.

I think it's a awesome fanfic.

Keep up the good work.

Can't wait to read more.

This is really interesting. I'm glad that Keith isn't really dead. Can't wait to see what is going to happen next.
Chica

This is a great start! I love it...and hopefully Keith will be ok so that he can come back home and tell Allura that he loves her in person. I can't wait for the next part. :)

Cool. Neat idea. I like how you made a reference to a problem that could really occur when you mentioned Allura's parents' death. The story seems to be moving a little fast. You could spend time describing the surrounding. Even if what you have written is what you are going for, its still pretty good.
Keep it up.