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vixiewixie
2006-10-10
ch 6,
abusegood job! :)
PJ4Eva-samdean4ever
2005-08-27
ch 6,
abuseFinish plz it was really really really good...
Thanks
Jenn
Annilein
2005-01-03
ch 6,
abuseI've just read your story and it's soo cute. Please continue writing. I'm willing to comment on every new chapter ;)
I'm looking forward to more!
Caitlyn Rose
2004-12-11
ch 5,
abuseyou should definitely update this soon, it's really good.
tasha2nice
2004-06-23
ch 5,
abuseGreat Keep going
Xtremely-Canadian
2004-06-13
ch 5,
abuseAwesome chapter...I can't wait to see what's gonna happen! Update soon, pretty pretty please!

*CIAO*

~*~Jess~*~
La Bella Durmiente
2004-06-12
ch 5,
abusehey there.. I like ur fic.. Really good, though that bryan guy thing bah.. not a nice boyfriend.. More Pacey Joey !! we want more we want more!
tasha2nice
2004-06-11
ch 1,
abuseI like it so far!
C-chan96
2004-06-10
ch 5,
abuseYay! An update! *does happy dance*

Sorry it's taken me awhile; I've been caught up with playing a Mighty Ducks RPG on LiveJournal.Com...^_^ Very fun, addicting, and time-consuming.

*growls and gnashes teeth at the creepy guy* Go get 'im, Pacey! Don't let him talk about (what will be) your Joey like that!

Hehehehe...Brian is such a whiny little brat. He needs to leave Pacey alone! Joey belongs with Pacey, and everybody but him has come to accept that! Jen cracks me up though. *grins*

I loved it! *gets giddy with happiness* I lurve it! Lol...Hehe...I'll be looking forward to another update! ^_^ But I'm heading to Mexico on a Mission Trip for my church next week, so I may not be able to read it until I get back.

Awesome job! I loved it, as always!

*Chels*

-Spread the Duck Love-
sunydee2
2004-06-08
ch 5,
abuseOh my goodness! The tension is too much. Can't we skip all of this part and just get to the good stuff? lol Well, I hope you get inspired and get to the next chapter very soon. It was a great chapter.

sunydee2
kelcb26
2004-06-08
ch 5,
abuseYou're really moving along well with this. I'm loving all the updates. I like all the banter between Pacey and Joey and he was so sweet when he took care of that guy for her! That was such a Pacey move!! And she spent her time talking to Pacey instead of her friends!! I'm kinda sad to say that I would too!:)I love the hints you are giving us too - like how they both are reacting to each other. Now they AREN'T going to fall in love are they?:) Why would we want that!!?:) LOL! I think that is the main goal of all of us P/Jers!!:)

Great job Maddie! I can't wait to read more!!:)
kelcb26
2004-06-07
ch 4,
abuseFirst, you fixed this! Good Job! I was going to say I thought something must have happened to your format when I first read it, but didn't have a chance to review then. Now that I do you've already fixed it!:) You didn't even need me!

Second, I see from her review you made my buddy C-chan smile! I'm glad because she needed it! And if C-chan smiles at your story it must be good cause she rocks!:)

But I already know your story is good too! i agree with C-chan - you are doing a great job. I loved when Pacey was singing and you know that I love music. Now Pacey just needs to inspire Joey to sing! And he needs to inspire her to get rid of Brian!!:) This was another good update. I will be looking for more!

~Kel~
Xtremely-Canadian
2004-06-07
ch 4,
abuseAwesome chapter...She's gonna work with him? Yay! Now maybe he'll get her up on stage to sing...Can't wait for the next chapter!

*CIAO*

~*~Jess~*~
C-chan96
2004-06-06
ch 4,
abuseHey! Seeing that you updated made me smile. ^_^ As kelcb26 knows, I was having some issues, but this cheered me up. ^_^ I needed a nice dose of P/J to make me feel better. I think your formatting got messed up, though, so you may want to fix it. The words got clumped together.

::giggles and starts reading::

Ha ha! Pacey's gonna sing! Pacey's gonna sing! ::squeaks::

That was SO great. I loved it! ^_^ Ahh, I just love Pacey...lol...I'm so happy that Joey's going to work there! Now she can fall madly in love with Pacey and breakup with Brian the Jerkface! Yay! I'm so excited! ::grins::

I loved the chapter! It was greatness...hee hee...But Brian is still evil and still needs to go away. He's just so...evil. Lol...^_~ I can't wait for the next update! ::squirms impatiently:: I love it to peices! It's going on my Favorites! ^_~

Love, crackers, and rock-n-roll!

*Chels*

-Spread the Duck Love-
sunydee2
2004-06-05
ch 4,
abuseWay too short! Ready for more. lol

thanks for keeping us on the edge of our seats.

Sunydee2
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