This is one story that I have to say you did a decent job with writing. I wish I watched Dr. Who more often. I liked how this is written and I will be linking this up from my weblog if you want some exposure with it. I needed the break from writing, and this story was one story that I have to say is good to read if another writer needs a break.

Your story is interesting espically how the cyberman are close to earth. Are you going to do another chapter.