Well, I'm guessing you're never going to finish this . . . but I wish you would. (sigh) It's wonderful! Way to bring slash to the cartoon we all grew up with!

aww that is so cute! Green eyes would look really good on Snap! I wonder what Reggie's gonna do V.V Please continue this soon I wanna see what happens!

Cool! I like this story so far, please update soon.

Please, PLEASE update! My life is in your hands now! I will serioulsy DIE if you don't update...please? *puppy eyes*

This is awesome! Please update soon!

UPDATE! THIS FANFIC ROCKS!

Well, this shows promise. I'm interested to see what you have in store next chapter.

omgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomg... OMG!

Okay first off, great story! I mean like WOW! I love it so much! YAY SNAP! YAY RUDY BEING SO DENSE!! srry... any way, UPDATE DAMN YOU! CUZ I LOVE UR STORY, MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!

I guess you didn't see the episode proving Snap can't be gay for mischeivous reasons: "I have a strict policy against going into the bowels of ANYTHING!"

Even being an avid enemy of slash, I like the writing style and the plot. You have real potential, Mizu.

Hey! I like this story! I say make more! Hey, send me that pic of Snap as anime so I know what you talk about. I really think this is good. Now, oh boy you knew this was coming, the critisism. Or whatever. Just try to format it a bit better. Oh, listen to me. This coming from someone who formats her stories like a blind, drunk monkey on a full moon. Anyway, yeah. Great plotline!

more soon please!

WOAH! This will be my fave storie for years lol ^^ VIVA LA BLUE LIPSTICK!

Oh... dear. You have no fear of receiving flames from me; I'm a fiend, meaning that I'll read almost anything slash. That, and the fact that I found this alone whilst just searching categories probably proves that I was actually *looking* for slash in this section.

But that aside, I like... um... how did you spell it again?...Hakuboku. She reminds me a little of myself... well,e xcept for the fact that I can't draw to save my life.

I honestly never took Snap to be one to wear bright blue lipstick or tight tank tops. i'm sorry, but I just had to laugh at that. Nothing offensive meant or anything, but it was just... yeah.

I really hope that you didn't abandon this!

Kawaii! i hope you update!

AI! If you don't update this, I'll just DIE! Please finish it.