you like depressing as hell kel neal stories, don't you? I suppose its lucky I'm a bit of a pessimist, or I might be upset. instead, like the little freak I am, I'm strangely satisfied. that was really good.

::sniff:: That was SO sad...I'm at the point of tears...poor Neal...

i cant beleive that i just now read this. it almost cried. at im at school, the people looked at me and thought i was crackers. o well. i love it, even if it is really sad.

wow this amazing. i love it!!

Ohh, *sniffle* that's so touching. Just... aargh.

You made me cry!
Don't you DARE have writer's block again. Ever. If you have to write sad stuff every time you have writer's block, I'm going to run out of tears.
P.s. It was the best KN one-shot I've ever read.

gods! i came back to reread this, thinking, 'oh, no, ive read it, i know what'll happen, i'll be fine' UGH! I was wrong, damn it all! i was in tears half way through the damned thing, and sobbing at the end!

I actually got tears in my eyes... it was so sad. im biting my lip right now to keep from crying. yes, im sentimental. *sniff*

*sniffle* I cried! Sad as it was, it was great. And you're right. Neal is a blind fool!

You make me cry, you terrible, evil, absolutely pefect, excellent writing, but still manipulative, author! I curse you and your amazing tragic romance. Only I love it, so I take back the curse. Beautiful.

ah thats so sad *tear
BR

I'm a little teary eye'd but that was really good and really sad!

Oh dear *sniffles* That was so sad!

That was... sad. And dramatic. And sort of sweet.

~Lady of the Fens~

Gah. :'(
I'm all teary-eyed now. That was sweet and sad. Gah. Why did you have to do that? :P
Lol, you had me getting all depressed and everything but i did smile when Neal dropped to his knees and screamed. It's so Hollywood. heh. Neal suffers the wrath of the gods. Poor baby.
Right, anyways... that was good. I like your other Joren-Kel fics too. You should write a longer Kel-Neal one...
Keep at it!