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| May All Your Bacon Burn 2006-09-03 ch 1, | abuseI really like it!! ^^ And it's a good thing ur not stealing her story, cuz she asked me to continue it for her...But, please write more! I'll give u a cookie! |
| KuramaKitsuneRyu 2006-08-20 ch 1, | abuseGood chapter!PLEASE UPDATE! |
| yllom21 2005-11-15 ch 1, | abuseHeehee, very interesting story, I can't wait for the next update! Hmm, interesting idea, I can see Kurama teaching Herbolody, but Hiei teaching potions? Hm, different I'd have to say. Nice job so far! |
| stix 2005-10-19 ch 1, anon. | abusei loved this story. it was so great. please add more to this story soon. |
| Ima Super Mute Ant 2005-09-02 ch 1, | abusewow! a harry potter crossover that makes sense? and written in a way I acn understand!! Thank you for being you !! ^.^ please update soon. |
| sandry stardiamond 2005-05-08 ch 1, | abusei really enjoyed in you need to update soon. |
| Jak Stark 2004-10-11 ch 1, | abuseI so far like this story. the characters are all the way they should be, but the grammar is a little off. Also, it would be nice if the chapters are longer. Good Luck, Jak |
| Jazi 2004-09-30 ch 1, | abuseLOL! This is a great idea! The idea of Hiei as a teacher is so funny! I really hope you continue on with this story, because I can't wait to see what happens. Let's see Kurama strange Malfoy with the rosewhip! |
| kanosa 2004-09-05 ch 1, | abusePlease continue! |
| Cartoon-Protector 2004-09-03 ch 1, | abusethis is going to be intersting. It is starting really well. |
| mizor 2004-09-02 ch 1, | abuseHikari! I love this story. Please write more. |
| inknamida 2004-08-29 ch 1, | abuseDarn, only one chapter so far? It's not bad, but any story could use another edit. I like how you started on the first day instead of copying Rowling's style of starting halfway through summer. Hiei seemed a little wierd at first, probably just the British terms he used though. It's original to me, and interesting, so please continue and update with the next chapter soon. |
| RebelWriter 2004-08-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseMe again, but I really love this story, and every time I see that it has so few reviews, it makes me want to cry! Of course, it isn't that bad for a story that's only one chapter. However, I have got to make a point to recommend your story to RoseMaiden and Icy Phoenix-two fanfic authors that I'm personal friends with. They're also really good authors. Be sure to read "What happened to my life?" by Icy Phoenix, "Life" by RoseMaiden, and "Cross-Galactic Party" by RoseMaiden (I grammar-edit Life, Co-authored Cross-Galactic Party and actively harass Icy Phoenix under the anonymous name Freaky Friday Feminette) I will have my own ff account very very soon, and I think I told you that you will be on my favorites list. So please update, for me if not for the sake of humanity. |
| RebelWriter 2004-08-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis was good. I' like to see where it goes. Hermione and Ron are always so mean to one another...*sigh*. Everyone knows they love each other. I wonder if you'll do something with that... But I won't mind if you don't. You have your own storyline planned out, which I respect. People who peck at the author's storyline are losers. You want the story done your way, do it yourself! That's why, once I get my own fanfiction account, I'm going to do a story where Ron and Hermione hook up. Not a romance, necessarily, but an adventure or comedy with romance in it. I'd be flattered if you'd check out my account once I get it to exist. I'll put you on my favorite stories/author alerts list! |
| roguekitsune 2004-08-21 ch 1, | abuseWhat's with the lame speech? Hiei would die before he was caught talking like that. They're both kind of OOC if you ask me. |