Excellent work, comrade. Your thrilling story has provided the general public with a true look into the mind of one of our proud Desolators. It will scare our enemies and appeal to those who feel they are not of this world. You know who we mean. Those who wish to break free from the drudgeries of normal life and wish to haved some way to express their emotions and bottled-up raw power. Now that they know that they are not alone in this world, they may feel the need to join our elite force of Desolators, leading the Motherland on a path of glory over the bodies of our enemies. comrade, always keep a glow as bright as the nuclear blast which you have writ in your heart, for that glow is your pride for the Soviet Union and your knowledge that it will always be behind you. Never let that light go out, comrade, for you have done your country well. Dasvehdonya.

Bro, i thought it was an excellent story, i could see everything that was happening, and how he died was pure beauty/destruction/bliss all rolled into one, excellent job.

This story is cool, but I don't think the desolator is THAT insane. Sure, he likes seeing people die but I don't think he likes getting hit by a nuclear missile. Also I don't think he's some genetically modified freak. But still the desolator is my favorite infantry unit in red alert 2 because he can kill hundreds of infantry single handedly without a scratch.

Hmm, different. But OK :)

Not bad not bad but your right you could have written it better i still like the way you wrote his lust for the pain/power and you showed his pov very well you should write proffesionaly and how about a story about the Allied sniper he would present an interesting pov with his job and his emotions during each mission.

That was bloody amazing, dude! Wow you write well.. Try a major fic, that would be amazing too!

I agree with your end comments. It is lacking something that the Flack Troopers story had.

EEP! You know, I think you're going along the exact opposite wavelengths from me. I'm writing a story about a Crazy Ivan and it's . . . well, this Desolator guy is scary. It's impossible- and quite real at the same time. Creepy and crazy and cool.

This is the coolest Red Alert 2 fanfic ever!Desolator is also my favourite unit!

This was also a well thought out and written story but i agree that it wasnt 100% and i also dont know why.maybe its because i read your phsycic trooper story about 5 mins ago and i was very impressed with that.i will be looking out for future chapters

Facinating. Though I think a bit more atmospheric detail is possible. Sweat, grass, blood, flashes...all the gifts of the pen, my friend...you have captured the emotional and mental intensity. Now, make us see it...

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A truly well written story portraying one of the best games created. Try doing Crazy Ivan sometime! Heh heh...

Try doing a story about Crazy Ivans to explain why they are crazy, or about a sniper, and the fact he loves to 'camp', or do one about a chrono Legionaire and how it feels to be sent over space and time.

very good! You should write one about a conscript or gi.still, great work!