Just the right amount of tension and honesty. Believable, even in a time traveling sphere sort of universe. The characters' dialog was reserved, which only added to the tension. Well edited. Congrats.

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Who says this story sucks! It is so cute and romantic!

it so does not suck.

a very very good effort. one of my favorite episodes and i think this coda was very fitting and worked for me.

continue to write and share!

Very good! An excellent description of both characters in a cute story! I like it very much! May I humbly dare mentioning that Frank's eyes are green too? Jade green like the eyes of a cat (my friend's cat's eyes are of the same color)...

Gabriele

really sweet story! great job!

Very nice, I really enjoyed it. Hope you'll write more son.

Emilie