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Polish
2009-07-08 . chapter 16
Oh, sure, just get out.

After a drug trip from hell!! woah... you kind of scare me now! I mean that was scary as hell! oh well, I loved it! ^^
Twilight Princess67
2008-06-25 . chapter 16
Sharpie boy seemed like Naruto. The tree reminded me of Sakura. The ferret was actually a weasel and reminded me of Itachi. The snake was who else but Orochimaru. I can't figure out anything else. That's what each symbol meant to me, was that what you were going for in this chapter?
XxRavenUchiha666xX
2008-06-07 . chapter 15
cool dream... weird that you thought of it at breakfast xD he killed his mommy! who was his 'friend'? *cough*itachi*cough* :3 great NOW what is he gonna make sasu do? >< UPDATE!! again! x3
Aria52
2008-03-23 . chapter 14
VTM getting to you? although you seem to have changed it a bit, and if you are following that then sasuke won't fit into the same one as yukio
oh, and love the emo comment XD
there, now you can't yell at me for not reviewing XP
Polish
2008-03-05 . chapter 14
Yukio hes like a cracked up insane version of momiji with a loita complex...dude I didnt think anyone could pull that off...
-stands up and claps- Wow your good! update soon!
Polish
2008-03-05 . chapter 10
From one extreme to another huh? wow, that was good sad and emo in a way. nice! very well done!
Polish
2008-03-05 . chapter 9
You killed Kyonkichi! How dare you! no really, dude what teh crap? seriously? you turned one who is already cursed into one of the undead? wow, this is getting good!
Polish
2008-03-03 . chapter 4
In a helpingly nonkilling way wack Ino over the head, "gilie betta recognize!" I say shrilly, *I cant STAND Ino!*
Polish
2008-03-03 . chapter 2
The sun hurt my skin and eyes, Boy this sounds like me in the summer! *dislikes summer too hot! and winter Too cold!*

I had no reflection.

Kakashi tried scrubbing the mirror
Its one of those fake mirrors! they do exist!

Jason readied his seemingly ever-present needle
Jeez man needle happy much!
Polish
2008-03-03 . chapter 1
Yknow, that caught me so off guard I started giggling like crazy,man it was funny! ^^
lilfancyg
2008-03-03 . chapter 14
i was checking 4 updates and when i saw this story updated, i was like jumping up and down. literally. i love this story since i found it awhile ago and i think it deserves much more reviews. i hope u get more ideas and update faster. it had been awhile... also, i think Yukio is...weird...or something else...
XxRavenUchiha666xX
2008-03-01 . chapter 14
oh man this guy is so annoying! i love 'im! write more! X3
Kagura-chan15
2008-02-14 . chapter 13
creepy, very descriptive. plz write more i want 2 c how it ends.

-kaga chan
SasukesRevenge7
2008-02-13 . chapter 9
This was a good fanfiction... I remember reading it a while back... so I read it again. I loved it.
Until I read chapter 9.
I'm really disappointed that you made it a crossover.
And with Fruits Basket nontheless.
I can't even read it now. Sorry.

So chapters 1,2,3,4,5,6,7, and 8 are great, but 9... is.. hm. And I haven't read an further.
XxRavenUchiha666xX
2007-12-20 . chapter 13
oh wow, thats pure evil... yukio is freaky! he's so cool tho! poor jiro! poor sasuke! omg! update soon! ^^
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