Could we have a continuation to this?

Deepness, me like. DEFINENTLY continue this; its a good story and deserves to be longer!

That is really good for a short fic. It obviously gets right to the point, but does it well. I can see this as a longer fic, I must say.

That was good. Are you going to continue on with the story? Or is that all? If that is all, I suggest you continue! I would love to see where you go from there I think it could be a great story. Its a great short story for the 150 work challenge, but I would love to read more!