Really good read, and interesting, realistic plot. I like it. Couldn't have Harry just shown that book passage to someone though?

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very interesting!!

I really like this story and hope you will do some follow up one shots of different potions they try out :D that would be cool :)

Excellent!

I don't thimk I've ever read a story like this before.. It's awesome. =)

Your Snape is perfectly in character, and it's always fun to watch the man do mental gymnastics to avoid any admission about Harry.

I really enjoyed reading this story. I think it works amazingly well as a one shot, but I can't help but want more. Great job on this story, and keep it up!

I find this story cute. Nice and cute... :-)

I loved this! Review's kinda late, but just in case you still read them, I must commend you on keeping them in character and making this an enjoyable read.

I love the idea of a hissing Harry.

Hissing Harry is hilarious!
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I love this story!

Good story. ^_^

Nice idea, I liked it. Snape was characterized well.

This is good, very IC for both of them.
~Minerva McGonagall Rox

this was recomended by AllesandraQuartermaine .and i enjoyed your story had me laughin .