YES damnit make a damn sequel and tell me what its called by making another chapter in this story of yours unless it is in this story well if its not then e-mail me at (I know that Kyosuke is spelled wrong)

NO! leave it alone. i know so many people like to add onto stories..but if it isn't going to close up unanswered questions then don't so a sequal. it'll just ruin the first.

OMFG! that was fuckin awesome

Shit! A sequel you must write this Ta19 begs it of you

And this kate she is what i call a typical A-class bitch so don't worry about it

Anyway loved the story waiting for the sequel so

Peace Out

Ta19

Go for it. I personaly would love to read it. Will it be one-short or have many chapters? Just wondering. Keep it up.

I thought your story was very sweet. Don't listen to ass holes like that. That just means they're not confedient in there own self, so they have to put other people down in front of other people. I'm excited for your next story. It seems very interesting and I hope to hear of it soon. Until then, Adieu.

Hey I just read kate's review and she also spelled 'else' wrong! What kind of a dumb ass spells 'else' wrong? Hey I'm a writer myself but at least I actully use the words I write! It sounded as though she went for a dictionary & searched under 'big words'! Hey well any way your story was quite good. keep it up!

Way to go Dragon! You Sure taught that bitch a lesson! I actually Think your songfic was pretty good. I'm looking forward to reading the sequel!

YES! U SHOULD DEFINATELY WRITE A SEQUAL! Especailly if it was as good as this one! I loved this story!

as long as it's not a tragity go for it!

If you DO do that sequel...I'll have to talk to ya over the phone, cuz I had a reviewer for one of my stories (it was a songfic) and they wanted me to continue it...*asd* yeah. anyway, ttyl, and I think, actually, that that (writing the sequel) would be a good idea...Nice knew name thingy majig (by this I mean "Dragon-san") _

*Torie-san

o! write the sequel it looks really good!i didnt really like the first chapter it was ok but the sequel looks great!

I thought you told a beautiful story. I loved how the passionate beginning turned out to be a dream. You use clever devices in your writing.

I agre with you 100%. Kate is so fucked. She must not have a brain in her head. I mean I prefer Inu Yasha with Kagome but that was good.

Kate:I have written essays with more detail and emotion along with a bit of realitization to a fictional novel. Right, then what you write on your essays is a load of bull shit! Sure, you might not have liked it so tell Mr. Dragon's Damnation.

I know what you need:

1) a good kick in the pants

2) a brain

3) a flame to show you what they are like

I got a flame once too. it was also sent anonymously. It called me a Kikyo lover. It said Kikyo was a bitch. She's alright but Kagome's weaker so I tend to perfer Kikyo over Kagome.

Kate probably knows what an F- is because she probably got all F minuses on her essays and report cards. I bet she has no talent as a writer whatsoever. Most people on this site give constructive criticisim not HATE MAIL.

Now go get a life and a brain because when God was giving out these gifts he obviouly skipped you. Serves you right because you don't deserve either of these gracious gifts.

I loved your story. And if that so-called *Kate* -bitch can't understand that she must be high. And who can't spell *inconceivably*? She must have a blunt in her mouth (or something else, lol).

But an *F-*? Gods! You know what, Kate?

Here's a little tip I think you may have already followed on your own: GO FUCK YOURSELF!

Anyways, Dragon-san, your story rocks. And Kate sucks ass.

That review is f-ed up. Your fan fic was great and I don't say great that much the song is not needed but it adds to the thoughts of the charecters. You must right more otherwise I'll write another review cursing you for stopping.

Number1DogDemon self appointed keeper of peace.