hey, this was pretty cool, I never read this one :) you could do so much with this one. anyhoo, it was a nice read!

this is good! I, also am a RobinAmon fan, keep writing!

hey thought it was good will you write some more.

I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?

Hey that was a really good start. I really want to know what happens next!
From the one and only Yuna of Paradise!

really good so far ^__^ i just saw one or two mistakes...but it was mostly free of grammar errors.

Long live AmonxRobin 'shipers

How could anybody even try to flame this?!?! It was soo good! Yes, I amit, I'm an AmonxRobin "shipper", ((heh heh, especially since I'm a pirate! Shipper, ship, get it?? Nevermind..))

I haven't seen the last eps yet, but I don't mind plot spoilers so long as they're as well done as this one! I really liked the way you switched between perspectives in the first section, w/ Robin as the Flame Goddess, and Amon her dark companion... it was really vivid!

And of course, the end was adorable.

Thank you for the loverly review on my story, especailly now that I see the genius from whence it came! LOL ^__^

Cheers,

Xtine the Pirate

I liked the fire shield and the fact you remembered about fire/oxygen. I loved the little fluffiness at the end (of course I can definitely be counted in the Amon/Robin ‘shipers group) and I totally agree with yellowdancer21 on the goddess comment.

It's heading into a good direction so far, please keep up the good work!

Very good for the first chapter. And I totally loved the Amon/Robin fluffiness at the end! Please continue on with the story (more Robin and Amon would be highly appreciated)! I didn't notice anything wrong with the story, as far as mistakes or OOC's, but even if there was a little bit of OOC I think it would work well with the story. Good job and expect to read more soon!

good so far! update soon!

I really like it! Are you a first time writer for Witch Hunter Robin? If so, your a really good one! Lol! Update soon!

Bana

Hm..I LOVE IT! It would cool if it went on!

This sounds like it could be good. I'd like to see you continue

I liked it! I think you did a good job of capturing the characters so far, and I like the idea of Robin being a "goddess." I think it's an interesting interpretation of what she was created for and I'm curious to see where you go with it. I think it's also very accurate how she gets caught up in her craft and seems to lose touch with reality for a little bit since she tended to do that at the end of the series. Amon was also very believable in his concern mixed with practicality. And it was so cute how he pulled her closer to him! Aw! Update soon!