Great! I really can't wait to see what happens!

Please update soon.

Very intriguing concept you have here in this story. At the beginning I was a little confused with Eighteen's and Seventeen's differing memories of things that have happened in the past, it's a mystery. I was thinking that Eighteen was transported to a different dimension or something since there's Saiyans. I'm wondering if Trunks, Vegeta and all the earth Sayains are in this reality.

Also the interaction between Eighteen and Seventeen is an interesting enigma. I don't know why Seventeen was displaying those homicidal tendencies towards that Sayain, and it seems their relationship is very close (even approaching a sexual attraction it seems), at least that's my impression.

You have a very engaging well-written story. I hope you continue with this concept and shed light on some of its mysteries. Peace out,

-Son of Darkness-

I hope that that corpe isn't Trunks'. That would suck!

I LOVE IT! I love the last part, too. That saiyin must have been killed by 17. Is it the waiter? Oh it's so good! Please continue!

Really cool a creative! I hope you keep going with it! I'm excited to read the next chapter. You're one of the best writers who do cyborg fanfiction, by the way.