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| Lariaxa 2007-06-21 ch 1, | abuseOk so I finally read it. It was really evil, that is, Itachi. At first the monologue didn't quite seem Itachi, but I'm thinking part of that is because Itachi bored is not Itachi how we know him. Way to show his supposed psycotic reasoning for wiping out his entire clan. It was really good, and kinda creepy, don't use that reasoning around me k? You'll freak me out! :P Two things: 1)What about the Sharingan thing that was supposedly his reason for doing it? Did I miss that being a part of it or are we just shrugging that part off for the story? 2)I know you've been really conscious of action lately, and I think that's what brought it to mind...Some more frustrated action by Itachi in the beginning of the monologue might be a nice addition to what you've written. Kicking Sasuke's teddy bears, drawing mustaches on pictures of the head of the clan and hokage, a couple random pranks...but they wouldn't hold enough interest, not enough of a challenge to satisfy. Blasted lightbulb! :P |
| n00b-masta2112 2007-02-21 ch 1, | abuseI like it. Good job. |
| Blonde-Existentialist 2006-03-14 ch 1, | abuseActually very good. It has a much more serious undertone than originally portrayed, truthful and realistic, although presented in a light and almost childish manner. Nicely done. |
| Meri Kaisla 2005-12-26 ch 1, | abuse... woah. impressive train of thoughts! |
| Shuki 2005-04-16 ch 1, | abuseInteresting thinking. Although almost humourous in places and in concept, the execution makes it seem plausible. |
| The TK 2004-11-25 ch 1, | abuseWow...I fusking love this O_O It's so accurate...I really feel it XD IT's totally plausible, you wrote like, exactly from Itachi's mind. Wicked cool >_< -adds to favorites- Rawk! |
| Ninja Shen 2004-09-16 ch 1, | abuseshit, thats really cool! lol, thats an awesome train of thought! it seems totally random, but it all stays together very well. I'd almost believe that thats why Itachi did it. I like this story alot, great job! |
| "D" 2004-06-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love this story! I hope Itachi didn't kill everyone over a light bulb either, cause thats really kind of pathetic. Anyway, keep on writing! |
| BloodPuddles 2004-06-12 ch 1, | abuseLOL! This story tells why Itachi killed his clan in a really funny way. Your narrative skills are superb. I just love this. It is totally different from all the other fanfics... XD! |
| Durian 2004-06-05 ch 1, | abuseLOL... The mere truth is your story inspired me to write my babble, but i am gonna take it down cos i don't keep fics with less than 5 reviews. Yes, Itachi killing a whole clan because he was bored was irrational to me, but the lightbulb bit was good. Keep writing and reading, bye ^-^ P/S: You can breathe now, and don't be put down because of me... XD |
| Genjo Sanzo 2004-06-04 ch 1, | abuseHehehehehehehehehe. I still love this. I'm almost disappointed you haven't gotten people yelling at you about it, yet. *smirk* |
| Yami no Tenshi 2004-06-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseXD Great, just great. But.. to do all of that for boredom... itachi must have been really bored. The lightbulb now needs to be worshipped. |
| AnimeOtaku313 2004-06-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseI loved it. It's completely different from the usual angst "I did it for you, Sasuke" type Itachi fic. And it makes sense of his motivations too. Beautiful, good job. |
| somebody random 2004-06-03 ch 1, anon. | abusehaha... this story was funny... *laughs like a knave* YES! ITACHI MUST... FIX THE LIGHT BULB! either that or wipe out the entire clan... my moneys with the latter. |
| Luki Duki 2004-06-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseo...o... |