I'm a novelist who had the same "problem" with getting different POVs into the same scene. Might I suggest a rather unique style that I use:

Max:
Max's POV for 1st part of the scene.

Rachael:
Changed to Rachael's POV.

Just a suggestion. Great piece!

*claps loudly* Glad your Rachel muse put her foot down and got you to write this. ;)

Wonderful. Write On.

Spiffy! I like this one, and I like your other story, too. I hope you keep writing more MS fics... Your writing is pretty decent quality stuff, and I'd enjoy reading more of your fics.

That was very, very cute. I can see them doing that, which makes it even better. You're a talented author, girl! Keep it up! Catch ya later! Luv ya all!
-Maxy Steel

*coughcough* AHHHH!!!! *runs around in circles, screams, tackles you and screams again* You are amasing! I bow down to you! I love this! AHHHH!!! *huggles you tightly* Oh I love this, everything about this. Oh thank you, thank you!! *sniffles* This is so beautiful. Oh and I know about POV problems... you're just better at fixing them. Rachel is always sneaking in and giving me her two cents. Silly woman. Oh I love her though! And you! Thank you again. Please, write some more... you write so dang well! *huggles you again*