Sweetnes. Kirie is SO awesome...

I really love it. there is so not enouh stories about Kirie and I really really love her. I mean she's my rollmodel
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Spectacular.

Whoa... That's awesome! I am VERY impressed! I wish I had talent like that. The way you put it was... entrancing. And the rhythm... it was so... flowing. GREAT JOB! I have read few poems as wonderful as this ^^ *claps*

good story, hope i can talk to you soon, don't know how else to get in touch with you, i'm worried about you and miss talking to you.

uriel
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T.T Aw! That is such a beautiful poem! You should publish it or something... Anyways I like it ^^

Wow, its awsome to find another Kirie fan. Isn't she just awsome? Great poem by the way. I could always try my hand at poetry, but I can't get it to rhyme or make any sense at all lol.

5/10
The wording is good and all but your formatting is horrible. I had trouble rating it because it was not broken into stanzas by rhyme scheme and just seemed to rhyme in random places with no consistancy

here is an example of a section of your poem in an easy to read format.

Do not weep, my sullen one